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    • Eric Castleman
      Eric Castleman @MissMarck last edited by

      @missmarck very cool!

      Btw, I suck at Instagram, and for some reason I can never find people via search. Can you by chance link me to your profile?

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      • MissMarck
        MissMarck last edited by

        Sure!
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        (I thought you were asking for my deviantart name before, so I gave you the wrong name XD )

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        • Eric Castleman
          Eric Castleman last edited by

          Been super busy, but have worked on this image as much as I can. I put in the table, and am working on the burner, trying to make it chrome like, as well as looking around at references for reflections onto tables.

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          • TessaW
            TessaW @Eric Castleman last edited by

            @eric-castleman It's looking great. I love how you've kept the liquid very soft looking inside. It really helps with the mood of the piece. The bubbles really help sell it. Not sure what you have planned in terms of the marshmallow, but I think you could push it so it looks more marshmallow-like. Maybe have the stick pushing through the top of it, shorten the proportion, and have a little toasting action going on.

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            • Eric Castleman
              Eric Castleman @TessaW last edited by

              @tessw yup, we ste on the same wave length. Those are my next few ideas. I have a poker going through the marshmallow in the drawing, but wanted to wait until I had the chrome on the burner correct. Softening up the marshmallow is something I have pondered, but the mid area is the next nightmare I have to tackle, so hopefully I will get those ideas right on when it comes to that part. Thanks for the insight. Very helpful.

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                When i can't post an image, it is often because I didn't choose the forum I want to post on. If I click on general and then try posting the image again, it works. Don't know why that is but that is my experience.

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                  Maybe if you can show a hint of the background through the liquid, like the table top lightly behind it? And the table top would be a little askew behind the bottle, right?

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • holleywilliamson
                    holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                    I keep looking at the thickness of that beaker, and it seems too thick. Agree on showing a little of what is behind the liquid.

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                    • Eric Castleman
                      Eric Castleman last edited by

                      Been super busy with scbwi stuff, and then my four year old son chipped his front tooth today on the side of the pool (ugh!), so just sitting down to this for the last hour or so. Here is where I am at with the body, and onto color, which will obviously require reflective color. I rounded out the marshmallow, per everyones suggestions, and finished the poker.

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                      • Eric Castleman
                        Eric Castleman last edited by

                        Done for the night. Any suggestions about lighting and glow to add to objects would be appreciated. Still have yet to relaly finish the foreground. Also, I'm going back and forth on him having hair or not.

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                        • Eric Castleman
                          Eric Castleman last edited by

                          Update. Starting to mess with transparent liquid a bit more. Struggling with how images would bend in round glass. Also, does the marshmallow still read as a marshmallow?

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                          • Eric Castleman
                            Eric Castleman last edited by

                            Shortened the marshmallow. Why I had it looking like I did, I don't know.

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                            • Jon Anderson
                              Jon Anderson SVS OG @Eric Castleman last edited by

                              @eric-castleman I think it reads more like a marshmallow now that it's shortened. You might try squishing the shape a little with some indentations of where it was held by the fingers to force it on the poker. Not necessary, just a suggestion to see if you like how it fits with the piece. Also, I personally think the baldness is fine but having some wacky mad scientist hair on the side could potentially make for some good storytelling. I like how the piece is coming along, thanks for sharing your progress.

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