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    • aska
      aska last edited by

      it's so cool! it reminds me of dancing bear Baloo in old Jungle Book 🙂

      Aska
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        Renske D last edited by

        Wow this piece looks great! Would be nice as a FB banner as well.
        There are already so many great suggestions made, I would add that it might be nice to make the hanging bear a little smaller and the bear on the left side has his leg crossed in front of him, maybe it would read better if the foot (his right foot) would be a bit more directed forwards, towards the viewer.

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        • smceccarelli
          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Thank you all!! @tombarrettillo @DanetteDraws @Sarah-LuAnn @Lawnz @aska @Lawnz @Renske-D So great suggestions - I am seeing all the issues you mention and clearly need to play around with the drawing and the poses a bit more before moving on.
          Meanwhile sketching out more ideas - really rough thumbnails! The reference to Calvin and Hobbes has reminded me of all of Watterson's fabulous snowmen...

          0_1512770950156_Snowpeople.jpg

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          • Lawnz
            Lawnz @smceccarelli last edited by

            @smceccarelli The hairdryer, HA!

            -L


            @Lawnz on Instagram & Twitter

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            • araina
              araina @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli Oh I love this ... The bear with the hat is my absolute favorite.. I really love the different perspectives you have going on.

              http://instagram.com/araina_danielle

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              • tombarrettillo
                tombarrettillo @smceccarelli last edited by tombarrettillo

                @smceccarelli these are great. And, yes, Watterson's snowmen were the best!

                https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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                  Renske D last edited by

                  Love the snowmen!

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Redraw of the dancing bears - grateful for all the good feedback!

                    0_1512855641768_Dancing_Bears_WIP3.jpg

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                      @smceccarelli I thought the first one was really good but like this one even better. Really fun drawing and so expressive.

                      Laurie DeMott
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                      • Doha
                        Doha @smceccarelli last edited by

                        @smceccarelli oh I love it!! The changes makes it much better.

                        Doha Koma

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                        • tombarrettillo
                          tombarrettillo @smceccarelli last edited by

                          @smceccarelli this is much better. one more minor thing I see is the front bear's mouth is blocked by the tree trunk, making his smile hard to read. Other than that, this is really good. Looking froward to the color!

                          https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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                          • jallott
                            jallott @smceccarelli last edited by

                            @smceccarelli I absolutely love these! The changes you made definitely add to it. It kind of has a classic Disney feel to it , especially with the the first bear with the hat and the bells. Love the snow men too, looking forward to seeing a developed version of them!

                            https://www.jonathandrawsstuff.com

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              Snow people series for this week's instagram - thoughts and suggestions welcome!
                              0_1512947008420_AllSnowPeople.jpg

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                              • Eli
                                Eli last edited by

                                Your stuff is wonderful as usual! Especially LOVE the middle one--and the kid having the hair dryer for his sidearm! Brilliant.

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                                • Lawnz
                                  Lawnz @smceccarelli last edited by

                                  @smceccarelli Awesome, Simona - I love it!

                                  -L


                                  @Lawnz on Instagram & Twitter

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                                  • Lee White
                                    Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                    @smceccarelli very nice as usual. The only slight change is the background. He looks like he is on a frozen tundra. I'd have some subtle nature back there. Perhaps some trees in the distance, etc. Just enough to hint at where he is. Probably a neighborhood or local park?

                                    SVS Faculty Instructor
                                    www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                      Renske D last edited by

                                      Wow @smceccarelli both pieces look awesome!

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                                      • Gary Wilkinson
                                        Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                        The snow people look great. If I were to say anything I think that the saturation is quite strong (although that could be my monitor).

                                        The bears book great, although I think I prefer the happy eyes in the first version.

                                        Really looking forward to seeing the final piece

                                        www.garywilkinsonart.com
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                                        • smceccarelli
                                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          Bears in color - not sure about the background....

                                          0_1513154825542_Dancing_Bears_WIP5.jpg

                                          0_1513154835032_Dancing_Bears_WIP5b.jpg

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                                          • Bob Szesnat
                                            Bob Szesnat last edited by

                                            Hi, I love this. The bears have so much character, love the poses.

                                            Because you asked I would make the following change:

                                            The bear holding the tree looks slightly turning while the tree looks straight on. The hanging bear seems to be on the same plain as the bear holding the pine tree and it slightly conflicts with each other. It is more visually engaging if the hanging bear's leg and body were behind the bear carrying the tree.

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