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      Renske D last edited by

      Love the snowmen!

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      • smceccarelli
        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Redraw of the dancing bears - grateful for all the good feedback!

        0_1512855641768_Dancing_Bears_WIP3.jpg

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

          @smceccarelli I thought the first one was really good but like this one even better. Really fun drawing and so expressive.

          Laurie DeMott
          instagram.com/demotlj

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          • Doha
            Doha @smceccarelli last edited by

            @smceccarelli oh I love it!! The changes makes it much better.

            Doha Koma

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            • tombarrettillo
              tombarrettillo @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli this is much better. one more minor thing I see is the front bear's mouth is blocked by the tree trunk, making his smile hard to read. Other than that, this is really good. Looking froward to the color!

              https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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              • jallott
                jallott @smceccarelli last edited by

                @smceccarelli I absolutely love these! The changes you made definitely add to it. It kind of has a classic Disney feel to it , especially with the the first bear with the hat and the bells. Love the snow men too, looking forward to seeing a developed version of them!

                https://www.jonathandrawsstuff.com

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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Snow people series for this week's instagram - thoughts and suggestions welcome!
                  0_1512947008420_AllSnowPeople.jpg

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                  • Eli
                    Eli last edited by

                    Your stuff is wonderful as usual! Especially LOVE the middle one--and the kid having the hair dryer for his sidearm! Brilliant.

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                    • Lawnz
                      Lawnz @smceccarelli last edited by

                      @smceccarelli Awesome, Simona - I love it!

                      -L


                      @Lawnz on Instagram & Twitter

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                      • Lee White
                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                        @smceccarelli very nice as usual. The only slight change is the background. He looks like he is on a frozen tundra. I'd have some subtle nature back there. Perhaps some trees in the distance, etc. Just enough to hint at where he is. Probably a neighborhood or local park?

                        SVS Faculty Instructor
                        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                          Renske D last edited by

                          Wow @smceccarelli both pieces look awesome!

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                          • Gary Wilkinson
                            Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                            The snow people look great. If I were to say anything I think that the saturation is quite strong (although that could be my monitor).

                            The bears book great, although I think I prefer the happy eyes in the first version.

                            Really looking forward to seeing the final piece

                            www.garywilkinsonart.com
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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              Bears in color - not sure about the background....

                              0_1513154825542_Dancing_Bears_WIP5.jpg

                              0_1513154835032_Dancing_Bears_WIP5b.jpg

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                              • Bob Szesnat
                                Bob Szesnat last edited by

                                Hi, I love this. The bears have so much character, love the poses.

                                Because you asked I would make the following change:

                                The bear holding the tree looks slightly turning while the tree looks straight on. The hanging bear seems to be on the same plain as the bear holding the pine tree and it slightly conflicts with each other. It is more visually engaging if the hanging bear's leg and body were behind the bear carrying the tree.

                                An Illustrator loving this Artist community.
                                www.bobszesnat.com | https://www.facebook.com/bobszesnatart/

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                                • tombarrettillo
                                  tombarrettillo @smceccarelli last edited by

                                  @smceccarelli Looks great. I would make a definite horizon line (maybe lower third), and snow for them to walk thru, or some kind of recognizable surface for them to walk on, and a few similar pine trees in the background. And the having the ornament and holly under the first bear's feet look like he is about to step on them (ouch).

                                  https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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                                    IanS @smceccarelli last edited by

                                    Hi @smceccarelli. I'm loving your work. The lower of the two images works for me. Great idea having a multi purpose illustration to promote yourself with. The snowmen also look awesome. I agree with what @lee-white said about the backgrounds but other than that it's top quality work!

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                                    • Bob Szesnat
                                      Bob Szesnat last edited by

                                      @bob-szesnat I see you totaly changed it, disregard my suggestion I was looking at the orginal sketch. Though still looks awsome.

                                      An Illustrator loving this Artist community.
                                      www.bobszesnat.com | https://www.facebook.com/bobszesnatart/

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