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    Accountability check, NO critiques please....

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    • aska
      aska last edited by

      i always thought that your story had potential! i can see kids laughing and pointing at playful chickens πŸ˜‰

      Aska
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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG @StudioHannah last edited by

        @studiohannah Thank you!

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @Eli last edited by

          @eli Thanks, Eli!

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

            @aska Thank you πŸ™‚

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG last edited by

              Here's Day 2 of accountability.

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              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Hi Marsha! I think it's awesome that you are tackling this book again and aiming for finish. The text is a lot of fun and I like the character of uncle Carl. Way to go!

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                  @smceccarelli Thanks a lot.

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                    Going to be gone all day but I woke up early and did a bit of prep for inking tomorrow so, just checking in. Now I need to go back to bed and try to sleep a couple hours so I can make it through the day and night!

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                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                      Today's work.

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                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • demotlj
                        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                        Wow, you are really zipping now! Great stuff and it’s fun watching the story develop.

                        Laurie DeMott
                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                          @demotlj πŸ™‚ Thanks. It feels good so far πŸ™‚

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG last edited by

                            Went to visit my sister this morning so only got one done today. I know it's not perfect but...it's whatI can do right now....pushing on!

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                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                              @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might do this one over.

                              I did do it over. Still not pefect but I'm okay with this one. Not okay with the last one...though the other photo is much better and clearer. I'm not a photographer πŸ™‚

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                              I need to fix the tangent where the knee and leg meet too, I see that now. Photoshop.

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                Okay, I redid it ONE more time. Question: Should I put the cow in again or is it a distraction from moving the story forward? Thank you.

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                                I did this one this afternoon. Catching up. Need to be more careful though.

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                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                  Here's my work for today. That's nine chickens!
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                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                    My work today. Not going to work out I don't think. This one will take m esome more time as I am trying to reposition it.........Oh well....pushing on.

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                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • K
                                      Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                      It's looking like a cute story! Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with all these chickens πŸ™‚

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by

                                        @kat Thanks πŸ™‚ Still plugging away πŸ™‚

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                          Finished this today.

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                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • MOO
                                            MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                            I did make some progress today with sketching.

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                                            The second image didn't post.....the sketches of Uncle Carl running. It's okay. I made a decision on that and will start inking soon.

                                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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