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    Accountability check, NO critiques please....

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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG @Eli last edited by

      @eli Thanks, Eli!

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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        MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

        @aska Thank you πŸ™‚

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG last edited by

          Here's Day 2 of accountability.

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          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Hi Marsha! I think it's awesome that you are tackling this book again and aiming for finish. The text is a lot of fun and I like the character of uncle Carl. Way to go!

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              MOO SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli Thanks a lot.

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                Going to be gone all day but I woke up early and did a bit of prep for inking tomorrow so, just checking in. Now I need to go back to bed and try to sleep a couple hours so I can make it through the day and night!

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                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                  Today's work.

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                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    Wow, you are really zipping now! Great stuff and it’s fun watching the story develop.

                    Laurie DeMott
                    instagram.com/demotlj

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                      MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                      @demotlj πŸ™‚ Thanks. It feels good so far πŸ™‚

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                        Went to visit my sister this morning so only got one done today. I know it's not perfect but...it's whatI can do right now....pushing on!

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                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                          @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might do this one over.

                          I did do it over. Still not pefect but I'm okay with this one. Not okay with the last one...though the other photo is much better and clearer. I'm not a photographer πŸ™‚

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                          I need to fix the tangent where the knee and leg meet too, I see that now. Photoshop.

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                            Okay, I redid it ONE more time. Question: Should I put the cow in again or is it a distraction from moving the story forward? Thank you.

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                            I did this one this afternoon. Catching up. Need to be more careful though.

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                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              MOO SVS OG last edited by

                              Here's my work for today. That's nine chickens!
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                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                My work today. Not going to work out I don't think. This one will take m esome more time as I am trying to reposition it.........Oh well....pushing on.

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                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                  It's looking like a cute story! Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with all these chickens πŸ™‚

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                                    MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by

                                    @kat Thanks πŸ™‚ Still plugging away πŸ™‚

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                      MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                      Finished this today.

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                                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                        I did make some progress today with sketching.

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                                        The second image didn't post.....the sketches of Uncle Carl running. It's okay. I made a decision on that and will start inking soon.

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                          @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might redo this one......

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                            MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                            Here are my two inkings for today. I'm starting to feel like these aren't that great again but I'm pushing ahead. Not sure if I should or not but....the cow is giving me some trouble again too....I hope I'm not giving in on this too soon. I believe someone else could do so much better but, it's my project so I am going to do it anyway. I am going to work on figure drawing and review the class on positioning characters again and also watch the visualizing perspective class. I'm a little embarrassed by these.....

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                                            One of them is not posting. I'll try again later.

                                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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