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    • AirenHall
      AirenHall last edited by

      @Leontine One of the first things that jumped out for me was that each of these color schemes seems to evoke a different season. #1: summer, #2: autumn, #3 spring. Was that intentional? Does the book take place during a specific season or is that kind of vague?

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      • RHirsch
        RHirsch last edited by

        I really like the color contrast in the third one, but I agree with @AirenHall that they look very seasonal. So if the story calls for a specific season that might decide it. Lovely work.

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

          @leontine I like the first one the best.


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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

            They are all lovely, but my favorite is the third one!

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            • Leontine
              Leontine @AirenHall last edited by

              @airenhall @smceccarelli @RHirsch Thank you, thats really helpful.The book will be released in autumn, however, its probably not sold out in half a year, so thats the difficult part. Id like to give it a feeling of 'happy', more than 'seasonal'. Perhaps I have to work on the blue version and give it a punch.

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

                @leontine These all look very nice! I would say that number three is the one that jumps out the most though - great work!

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                • djlambson
                  djlambson last edited by

                  What a great mood..I love it. For me the orange and blue color combo really popped, that's the one I'd choose!

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                  • Eli
                    Eli last edited by

                    Love them all, but ditto number 3!

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                    • Miriam
                      Miriam last edited by Miriam

                      The 3rd one is my favorite. I think the characters stand out against the background more in this one & it has a little more depth between the foreground and the background.

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                      • Sofie Schollaert
                        Sofie Schollaert last edited by

                        Like them a lot, great movement and joy that comes from this picture! I like the 3rd one the most because the children jump out more. Really love it!

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