I finished the writing, and here are the rough to semi finished illustrations. How can i improve the way the pictures and words work together? Is the story bubble in the last illustration distracting or confusing? If so, any ideas how i can clarify it? Would it work if i took the bubble out

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@Meta said in Slow, slow Slowvember ... children's right to roam:

I could imagine that the workflow on a screen tablet is much smoother

screen tablet vs a regular ol slab of plastic tablet is like night and day. It would definitely help your lineart look more natural out of photoshop.

Really neat project, by the way 🙂 Lovin' how it's goin

@Ionut-Marian I'm pretty sure this is her instagram account here: https://www.instagram.com/irinageorgescudraws/?hl=en

He work is so beautiful, thanks for the follow up comment so that I could find it.

Like them a lot, great movement and joy that comes from this picture! I like the 3rd one the most because the children jump out more. Really love it!