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    Redesigning (standardizing?) my webcomic characters. Critiques and suggestions most appreciated

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    • Buddy Skelton
      Buddy Skelton last edited by

      I like the style. The boys feet look too small from what I'm seeing compared to the other character. Good start though.

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      • braden H
        braden H @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

        @sarah-luann

        Doing a character reference sheet for each character is probably something I should do anyways. I think I'll do that sooner rather than later. Thanks 🙂

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        • braden H
          braden H @Buddy Skelton last edited by

          @buddy-skelton

          Thank you! getting proportions right is one of the reasons I'm trying to really nail down the designs.

          Those ARE tiny feet XD

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Adding a couple of extra poses/characters as suggested. Also kinda changed a few things already... (damn you, consistency).

            Other than keeping character references, does anyone have any tips for staying consistent from page to page?

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            • jimsz
              jimsz last edited by

              Looks good! Are you using photoshop?

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              • Chip Valecek
                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                I am not great at staying consistent, but I feel what helps is if you do all your sketching on one day, then inks on another and then color on another that will help. If i go page by page, i start to see a shift in how I am painting/inking.


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                • braden H
                  braden H @jimsz last edited by

                  @jimsz

                  Thanks! I'm using Corel Painter instead of photoshop. Weird choice, I know, but I'm used to the program at this point.

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Chip Valecek last edited by

                    @chip-valecek

                    Thanks for the advice! This is the advice I got from the how to make graphic novels vid as well. I think the next chapter I'll definitely give it a try.

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                    • Jon Anderson
                      Jon Anderson SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                      @art-of-b These look good and I really like the expressions. As for consistency part of the trick is drawing the characters repeatedly over and over instead of just doing a couple of character references alone. The more you draw and put them in different poses and angles you'll begin to commit the shapes and quirks that make up that character to memory so that it's easier to draw them when it matters. Keep it up!

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Jon Anderson last edited by

                        @jon-anderson

                        Thanks! I suppose once I commit to drawing them the same from page to page the designs will kinda cement themselves.

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