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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      Looks great to me! I think the option where the sun's awake better conveys the 'hidden' aspect.

      Looking forward to seeing it coloured!

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        A Former User last edited by A Former User

        @donfito said in Hidden WIP:
        Hello there and welcome! I really like your creatures under the couch hunting for popcorn concept. It has a rich backstory. I know they love popcorn! What else do they want from this clueless homeowner? You could easily come up with a series of illustrations on this theme. It could be a really fun project. Nice sketches.

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        • Donfito
          Donfito @braden H last edited by

          @art-of-b thanks a lot I was more decide for that one too. next step colors 😃

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          • Donfito
            Donfito @Guest last edited by Donfito

            @tom-shannon Thank you Tom, it was really difficult to choose between the two ideas, but I went for the space theme because I want to try different color lights, at the end I'm going to paint the other one too in the future. but now I just want to improve my lighting skill.

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            • Donfito
              Donfito last edited by Donfito

              First color update :), at least the background , still a lot of details to add but this is what I have right now, hope to finish this on time.
              ( asteroid still WIP )

              0_1532671643038_01Color.jpg

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              • leothejediartist
                leothejediartist last edited by

                Wow these look good. Especially the color update, harmonizes together. Would you mind me asking how you upload pictures like this? New to the forum and would like to start participating in these contests

                One man's crap is another man's manure...or something like that
                https://www.instagram.com/leothejediartist/

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                • Jon Anderson
                  Jon Anderson SVS OG @Donfito last edited by

                  @donfito This is cool! Just a reminder, though, to watch your values on the little characters in the foreground. They're hiding from the sun not the viewers so you can fudge the lighting on them a bit to make them an easier read. I'm looking forward to seeing your progress.

                  instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Donfito last edited by

                    @donfito

                    Oh wow! I love the colours!

                    If you'd like advice/small critique, read further 🙂

                    -I do agree with Jon Anderson, though. Our friend the mischievous asteroid needs a bit of bounce light to keep him from getting lost in the image.

                    -Make a copy, desaturate it and fiddle with values from there.

                    Loving it so far 🙂

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                    • Donfito
                      Donfito @leothejediartist last edited by Donfito

                      @leothejediartist sorry for my late reply, been busy days, when you post theres a little icon with an arrow to upload your images, this button 0_1532975039231_Untitled-1.jpg

                      and hope to see your works soon.!

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                      • Donfito
                        Donfito @Jon Anderson last edited by

                        @jon-anderson thank you, your comment helps a lot took my time doing the light but I think it works nice what do you think? any comments and critics are welcome

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                        • Donfito
                          Donfito @braden H last edited by

                          @art-of-b thank your for comments I really appreciated , let me know what you think with my last update.

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                            • Donfito
                              Donfito last edited by

                              Another color update:

                              • work the front part to make it more integrated with the colors. (thank you @jon-anderson and @art-of-b)
                              • I think I need to add more particles to the front part, litte rocks.
                              • Now I'm working on the planets , still deciding if I need to make it smaller but I guess when I have the sun I'll know if I need to do that.
                              • I didn't put the basket at the end, for some reason I don't feel it adds something.

                              Let me know what you think, comments and critiques are welcome.

                              0_1532975737919_02Color.jpg

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                              • Jon Anderson
                                Jon Anderson SVS OG @Donfito last edited by

                                @donfito That's working better!

                                instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H last edited by

                                  Nice! I think it's much improved. Can't wait to see how it turns out!

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                                  • Donfito
                                    Donfito last edited by Donfito

                                    Here's my final image, hope you like it and thanks for all the comments to make it better!
                                    0_1533093431558_DiscoPlanet.jpg

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