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    • Jon Anderson
      Jon Anderson SVS OG @Donfito last edited by

      @donfito This is cool! Just a reminder, though, to watch your values on the little characters in the foreground. They're hiding from the sun not the viewers so you can fudge the lighting on them a bit to make them an easier read. I'm looking forward to seeing your progress.

      instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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      • braden H
        braden H @Donfito last edited by

        @donfito

        Oh wow! I love the colours!

        If you'd like advice/small critique, read further 🙂

        -I do agree with Jon Anderson, though. Our friend the mischievous asteroid needs a bit of bounce light to keep him from getting lost in the image.

        -Make a copy, desaturate it and fiddle with values from there.

        Loving it so far 🙂

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        • Donfito
          Donfito @leothejediartist last edited by Donfito

          @leothejediartist sorry for my late reply, been busy days, when you post theres a little icon with an arrow to upload your images, this button 0_1532975039231_Untitled-1.jpg

          and hope to see your works soon.!

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          • Donfito
            Donfito @Jon Anderson last edited by

            @jon-anderson thank you, your comment helps a lot took my time doing the light but I think it works nice what do you think? any comments and critics are welcome

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            • Donfito
              Donfito @braden H last edited by

              @art-of-b thank your for comments I really appreciated , let me know what you think with my last update.

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              • Donfito
                Donfito last edited by Donfito

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                • Donfito
                  Donfito last edited by

                  Another color update:

                  • work the front part to make it more integrated with the colors. (thank you @jon-anderson and @art-of-b)
                  • I think I need to add more particles to the front part, litte rocks.
                  • Now I'm working on the planets , still deciding if I need to make it smaller but I guess when I have the sun I'll know if I need to do that.
                  • I didn't put the basket at the end, for some reason I don't feel it adds something.

                  Let me know what you think, comments and critiques are welcome.

                  0_1532975737919_02Color.jpg

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                  • Jon Anderson
                    Jon Anderson SVS OG @Donfito last edited by

                    @donfito That's working better!

                    instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      Nice! I think it's much improved. Can't wait to see how it turns out!

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                      • Donfito
                        Donfito last edited by Donfito

                        Here's my final image, hope you like it and thanks for all the comments to make it better!
                        0_1533093431558_DiscoPlanet.jpg

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