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    • rcartwright
      rcartwright @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

      @nyrrylcadiz it's good you cant make out some of the objects. Objects falling off into shadow is a strong way of focusing the composition

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      • JulPer
        JulPer @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

        @gary-wilkinson Hey Gary, I LOVE this concept! Makes me want to make a 3d scene based on it, it has such a great mood!
        I hope you don't mind, but I took the image and played with it a bit in Photoshop, mainly messed with the exposure and curves to give it a bit more light overall. Can't wait to see the final version!
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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @rcartwright last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

          @rcartwright i guess you’re right but you can still lighten the interior without stealling focus from the main subject. For example, coloring the interior with a lighter but muted, cooler color. It just helps the illustration to be more readable.

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          • Gary Wilkinson
            Gary Wilkinson last edited by

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            • Gary Wilkinson
              Gary Wilkinson last edited by Gary Wilkinson

              Again, thanks for everyone's comments and suggestions. I'm calling the piece done as it's a time sink to get it perfect, but im happy with how it has turned out, hope it's appealing:

              0_1536125877466_birthday party final small.jpg

              @Jason-Bowen good catch, I flip the image a lot and forget I wrote it the wrong way 😛

              @JulPer It would be great to see it modeled up 🙂 Thanks for the adjustments. I think pushing the exposure slightly was a good idea.

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              • bnewman
                bnewman last edited by

                Gary, this turned out great! I love the mood of this piece, the little sister is great, and the balloons are so shiny!

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  @gary-wilkinson YES! That teal lighting you did on the right side really makes thing more easy to read and the lighting on the ballons is subtle but does wonders to the whole illustration.

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                  • Joen Söderholm
                    Joen Söderholm last edited by

                    It turned out awesome! I agree that the reflections on the balloons framed the whole thing in a really good way.

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      Dude! Love this! Now this is what I call illustrator eye candy!

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        Oh wow! This really turned out.

                        I'm still struggling with light and colour so this kind of thing is inspiring 🙂

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                        • JulPer
                          JulPer @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                          @gary-wilkinson It turned out awesome! I really like it, it still keeps the original mood without being too dark. Great work!

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