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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      Really cool so far!

      As for perspective, you're doing a few things well that are adding to depth. You're laying object to create the illusion of depth (goats in front of wagon, people in front of wagon, wagon in front of horizon line). Since there's no real defined vanishing point, it works.

      If you wanted to exaggerate perspective you could pick two vanishing points and put the wagon on two point perspective. In this case, I think it works fine as is. It doesn't look wonky, if you get what I mean.

      Is it in perfect perspective? No. Does it need to be? Also no.

      Looking forward to the progress 🙂

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose @braden H last edited by

        @art-of-b Dude, super good advice! Sometimes I get caught up on how things should look and worry they don't look right. I have found it helps to take a break form one piece and work on another for a time, (maybe have a cup of tea in-between) and come back to the first piece with fresh eyes, Its amazing what things you notice that you didn't notice before! But one thing I do miss from art school is the input from other artists. So excited to have that now!!!!!

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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          Can you tell my fav color is red? May have got ahead of myself with coloring before finishing with the line work, but I was in a color mood. Anybody have tips on what I can do to add more motion/energy? I put a few streak lines behind the caravan, but I’m not sure if its enough.

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          • juliepeelart
            juliepeelart SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by juliepeelart

            @squirrelsize I love the red! It gives a neat warm feel to the picture. For motion, one thought I had was that the passengers in the wagon are sitting very straight for being in a moving wagon. Maybe try and play with the poses there. I like the roof is has a fun design!

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            • Elizabeth Rose
              Elizabeth Rose @juliepeelart last edited by

              @juliepeelart Cool idea! I’ll try and mess around with the postures and see what I come up with! Thanks Julie!

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              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                Added some hills in the background and some branches in the foreground

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                • Jonas Zavacky
                  Jonas Zavacky @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                  @squirrelsize This is looking great! Love the color palette... I can sense autumn from that. Maybe you can add fallen leaves to the ground.

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                    @jonas-zavacky Oh yes! I like the idea of falling leaves! Will do! Thanks

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                      I’m allowing the Fall piece to pickle over the weekend. Having some fun with some character sketches though!

                      I need to work on my hands, they are so important for expression, yet so hard to draw

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        @squirrelsize

                        I feel your pain about hands. But I promise you that once you draw enough of them it starts to click 🙂

                        What REALLY drive me nuts are feet.

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                        • Elizabeth Rose
                          Elizabeth Rose @braden H last edited by

                          @art-of-b I agree with you about the feet too, usually i'm so focused on getting the hands right the feet get overshadowed lol

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                            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                            Did some cleaning up, next I think I might play around with putting in a few vintage textures and see where that leads.

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                              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                              I added some contrast to the drawing and some vintage distressing textures. Is it too much? What are your alls thoughts? Fire away!

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                              • LauraA
                                LauraA SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                @squirrelsize I like the new colors. They're richer, and I like the overlay of all the primary colors to form neutrals instead of just color-picking a neutral. I'd say the color on the goats is a real strong point now.

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                                • Elizabeth Rose
                                  Elizabeth Rose @LauraA last edited by

                                  @lauraa Thanks Laura! I tend to keep a lot of my work soft, its been a challenge to try to get those deeper colors.

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