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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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      Can you tell my fav color is red? May have got ahead of myself with coloring before finishing with the line work, but I was in a color mood. Anybody have tips on what I can do to add more motion/energy? I put a few streak lines behind the caravan, but I’m not sure if its enough.

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        juliepeelart SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by juliepeelart

        @squirrelsize I love the red! It gives a neat warm feel to the picture. For motion, one thought I had was that the passengers in the wagon are sitting very straight for being in a moving wagon. Maybe try and play with the poses there. I like the roof is has a fun design!

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose @juliepeelart last edited by

          @juliepeelart Cool idea! I’ll try and mess around with the postures and see what I come up with! Thanks Julie!

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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            Added some hills in the background and some branches in the foreground

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              Jonas Zavacky @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              @squirrelsize This is looking great! Love the color palette... I can sense autumn from that. Maybe you can add fallen leaves to the ground.

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              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                @jonas-zavacky Oh yes! I like the idea of falling leaves! Will do! Thanks

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                  I’m allowing the Fall piece to pickle over the weekend. Having some fun with some character sketches though!

                  I need to work on my hands, they are so important for expression, yet so hard to draw

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    @squirrelsize

                    I feel your pain about hands. But I promise you that once you draw enough of them it starts to click 🙂

                    What REALLY drive me nuts are feet.

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose @braden H last edited by

                      @art-of-b I agree with you about the feet too, usually i'm so focused on getting the hands right the feet get overshadowed lol

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                      • Elizabeth Rose
                        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                        Did some cleaning up, next I think I might play around with putting in a few vintage textures and see where that leads.

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                        • Elizabeth Rose
                          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                          I added some contrast to the drawing and some vintage distressing textures. Is it too much? What are your alls thoughts? Fire away!

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                          • LauraA
                            LauraA SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                            @squirrelsize I like the new colors. They're richer, and I like the overlay of all the primary colors to form neutrals instead of just color-picking a neutral. I'd say the color on the goats is a real strong point now.

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                            • Elizabeth Rose
                              Elizabeth Rose @LauraA last edited by

                              @lauraa Thanks Laura! I tend to keep a lot of my work soft, its been a challenge to try to get those deeper colors.

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