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    • JudeKillory
      JudeKillory last edited by

      I like how the pumpkins are stowed away. Makes me want to see more gourds hanging out. I like that youโ€™re challenging yourself too. This forum is a safe space to throw your art out there and get constructive feedback, I think it may be my favorite thing about svs.

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      • Jonas Zavacky
        Jonas Zavacky last edited by

        Thank you for so much feedback! I love this forum. @Squirrelsize yes I think extending it a bit helped it and @JudeKill I add 3 more gourds to the bottom, but maybe there can be more hehe.

        anyway, what do you think about where it is heading ๐Ÿ™‚ Open to any feedback.
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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          Yes! That extra scene to the side allows the eye to flow over the drawing way better! Love this dude!

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          • Jonas Zavacky
            Jonas Zavacky last edited by

            Showing this one more time in value phase. Just to make sure the focal point is clear to you guys and overall if it feels right.
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            • Jonas Zavacky
              Jonas Zavacky last edited by Jonas Zavacky

              Ok, finally I think the values are in a place that I can move further on so I decided to finally work on color (also I changed the background because I was very unhappy with the last one)

              This is the first shot and I definitely want to explore more color schemes. but do you guys think I am going the right way? Thanks again for every comment. You are the best!
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              • Jonas Zavacky
                Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                I played with the colors more and tried a cooler variant too which I probably like more than the more warm one.

                But what do you guys think?
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                • TessaW
                  TessaW @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                  @jonas-zavacky I like the cooler variant as well

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    Dude! Looking great! I love the changes you did in the side room scene. I like the second one with the green cabinets because of the warm yellow lighting. Definitely feels warm in that room.
                    I like the first one with the red in the cabinets bouncing off the color of her scarf. Good stuff bro

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                    • chrisaakins
                      chrisaakins last edited by

                      Looks great. Man...I like both. I think I like the cool colors on her more, though.

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                      • Jonas Zavacky
                        Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                        Thank you for the feedback! @TessaW @Squirrelsize @chrisaakins

                        I think I will go with the cooler one, but I will push the warmth of the side room more to get the feeling I am looking for.

                        Thank you!! ^^ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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