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    • braden H
      braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

      @aleksey Thank you! Great suggestions 🙂 I think I like the feathers in the air, though. We'll see! I may later on paint them out and put them on the ground somewhere.

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

        @braden-hallett

        I really like the power of the blue and orange. Reminds me of other worldly, the northern lights and the dawn of the new day.

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        • Erin.Cortese
          Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by Erin.Cortese

          @braden-hallett Oh wow! Clearly that step is working for you, so I wouldn't change it! I'm really excited to see this finished. Although, I'm only assuming it is not finished because of your last line "I get to paint my heart out". Do you have more detail to add?

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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

            Its looking great! What if he was holding a feather to show the size of the bird vs the person/dog?


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            • KathrynAdebayo
              KathrynAdebayo last edited by

              This is so powerful. I love where it's going so far. I think someone else already mentioned the larger feather, but to add to that, I thought I'd throw in my impression that it looks like it's more in the foreground than its shadow suggests. It looks to me as if the shadow might even belong in front of the bird... in case that's helpful. 🙂 I think this is one of my favorite pieces that I've seen of yours so far.

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              • NizhoniWolf
                NizhoniWolf last edited by

                I also think there should be a feather on the ground next to/held by the person/dog ^_^

                Also, i don't know if its just me, but the Mountains look too smooth to be mountains(?)

                The Orange/blue wip is beautiful and very eye catching! And when i see the silhouette i think of a Phoenix!

                The other wip is (again very beautiful) calm and serene, i think i prefer this one.

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                  @heather-boyd It does look pretty cool 🙂 There's a local person who does paintings using these kinds of simple super saturated colours on landscapes and they look awesome and other worldly.

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                    @inkandspatter Oh, lots more details to add 🙂 There's lots of lines to lose and find, textures to bring out, and lots of kind of pushing and pulling.

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @Chip Valecek last edited by

                      @chip-valecek Thanks, Chip 🙂 I might try the little feather in the person's hand, but I'm gonna try and push the giant feathers back with some atmospheric perspective first.

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                        @kathrynadebayo Thanks so much! I get a little better every challenge. I think you're right about that second feather. Movin' its shadow's an easy thing to do, thankfully 🙂

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @NizhoniWolf last edited by

                          @nizhoniwolf said in BIG WIP:

                          Also, i don't know if its just me, but the Mountains look too smooth to be mountains(?)

                          True, but they look cool 🙂

                          Thanks very much for the feedback

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                          • Johanna Kim
                            Johanna Kim SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                            @braden-hallett Very cool image. I'm particularly loving the way you've rendered the clouds.

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Johanna Kim last edited by

                              @johanna-kim Thanks 🙂 Clouds are one of my favourite things to render. So floofy...

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                              • braden H
                                braden H last edited by

                                Yet more paint. I really liked the idea of having an object to better show scale, but I wasn't completely sold on the feather (not a bad idea at all, though) so I figured a lone tree and local forest denizen might work.

                                Slowly fixing, pushing and pulling from here on out.

                                I may remove the chipmunk...

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                                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                  @braden-hallett this is looking amazing!

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                                  • LauraA
                                    LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                                    Oh my! That thing is huge!!! I'm already scared. Love the economy of the whole thing.

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                                    • K
                                      Kat SVS OG last edited by

                                      Love this, including the chipmunk!

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                                      • Dima Eichhorn
                                        Dima Eichhorn @braden H last edited by

                                        @braden-hallett I love this !

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                                        • rotub
                                          rotub last edited by

                                          It took me a few seconds to see the giant bird's shadow, but once I had I really fell in love with this piece. Really nice concept and great execution. Look forward to seeing the finished artwork

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @rotub last edited by

                                            @rotub As long as it gets gotten gradually I'm gleeful 🙂

                                            It's almost completely finished at this point. I just need to spend a few hours her and there kinda fiddling if you get what I mean.

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