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    • JerrySketchyArt
      JerrySketchyArt last edited by

      Second vote for C. It flows well.

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      • ThisKateCreates
        ThisKateCreates last edited by

        C popped out

        https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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        • Jonas Zavacky
          Jonas Zavacky last edited by

          Thanks for the feedback! So far it is set then 😃

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          • SCBenedict
            SCBenedict last edited by

            C, A, D, B

            Good luck!

            "Tell your own story, and you will be interesting." Louise Bourgeois

            scbenedict.com

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            • ?
              A Former User last edited by

              C really makes you feel like you are in the dining hall, and gives a great sense of dimension to the aliens. My second favourite is D, which I think invites more of a "I'm spying on these creatures" sort of feel.

              I really like the swirl in the rock up in the left corner of A, do you think that could be incorporated into C somehow?

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              • Jonas Zavacky
                Jonas Zavacky @Guest last edited by

                @mia-clarke Thank you for the input! I really like hearing what sort of feel you have from those thumbnails:)

                Yes, It could... C is basically seen from the opposite direction as A so I will play with that 🙂

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                • Jonas Zavacky
                  Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                  okay made some basic drawing and value sketch. any thought appreciated!

                  design.jpg

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                  • ?
                    A Former User last edited by

                    Wow! It's so great to see this come to life! I really love the direction, and the swirl looks so good at the center bottom. I would not what these fellas to turn around!

                    I wonder, with all that light coming in from the top right, would it make sense for the overhang on the right to be quite a lot darker at the top? I feel like some added value differences in that section would make for a more interesting picture. What do you think?

                    Will the walls and overhangs be moist, or dripping?

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                    • Jonas Zavacky
                      Jonas Zavacky @Guest last edited by

                      @mia-clarke glad you like it!

                      hmmm yes that sounds right.. for now it kinda blends together. Thanks !

                      yes the will, they won't be dripping everywhere, but some moist is definitely in my mind! also there will be higher amount of plants and roots all over the place.. 🙂

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                      • Jonas Zavacky
                        Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                        I guess I will call it done for now. Mainly because I have a tight deadline and I need to get everything done - and for the purpose of what it is for I think it is enough. If I will some time to revisit this I surely will.

                        But last questions. For presentation purposes. With tone or without?

                        design.jpg

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                          A Former User @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                          @Jonas-Zavacky Love both, but the one with tone, I feel, matches the mood better. Great work!

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                          • Jonas Zavacky
                            Jonas Zavacky @Guest last edited by

                            @mia-clarke Thank you !! 🙂 appreciate all the input you gave me throughout this!

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