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    • ThisKateCreates
      ThisKateCreates last edited by

      C popped out

      https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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      • Jonas Zavacky
        Jonas Zavacky last edited by

        Thanks for the feedback! So far it is set then 😃

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        • SCBenedict
          SCBenedict last edited by

          C, A, D, B

          Good luck!

          "Tell your own story, and you will be interesting." Louise Bourgeois

          scbenedict.com

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          • ?
            A Former User last edited by

            C really makes you feel like you are in the dining hall, and gives a great sense of dimension to the aliens. My second favourite is D, which I think invites more of a "I'm spying on these creatures" sort of feel.

            I really like the swirl in the rock up in the left corner of A, do you think that could be incorporated into C somehow?

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            • Jonas Zavacky
              Jonas Zavacky @Guest last edited by

              @mia-clarke Thank you for the input! I really like hearing what sort of feel you have from those thumbnails:)

              Yes, It could... C is basically seen from the opposite direction as A so I will play with that 🙂

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              • Jonas Zavacky
                Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                okay made some basic drawing and value sketch. any thought appreciated!

                design.jpg

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                • ?
                  A Former User last edited by

                  Wow! It's so great to see this come to life! I really love the direction, and the swirl looks so good at the center bottom. I would not what these fellas to turn around!

                  I wonder, with all that light coming in from the top right, would it make sense for the overhang on the right to be quite a lot darker at the top? I feel like some added value differences in that section would make for a more interesting picture. What do you think?

                  Will the walls and overhangs be moist, or dripping?

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                  • Jonas Zavacky
                    Jonas Zavacky @Guest last edited by

                    @mia-clarke glad you like it!

                    hmmm yes that sounds right.. for now it kinda blends together. Thanks !

                    yes the will, they won't be dripping everywhere, but some moist is definitely in my mind! also there will be higher amount of plants and roots all over the place.. 🙂

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                    • Jonas Zavacky
                      Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                      I guess I will call it done for now. Mainly because I have a tight deadline and I need to get everything done - and for the purpose of what it is for I think it is enough. If I will some time to revisit this I surely will.

                      But last questions. For presentation purposes. With tone or without?

                      design.jpg

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                        A Former User @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                        @Jonas-Zavacky Love both, but the one with tone, I feel, matches the mood better. Great work!

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                        • Jonas Zavacky
                          Jonas Zavacky @Guest last edited by

                          @mia-clarke Thank you !! 🙂 appreciate all the input you gave me throughout this!

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