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    • braden H
      braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

      @Aleksey Thanks πŸ˜€ I'm gonna go with the overly wamr colour scheme for the chaos with the nice cool blue in the eye of the storm with the parents.

      They ARE super into themselves :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: at least until little Danica finds something solid in those cupboards and whips it at Jeremy's face to shut him up. Then Philly's gonna lose his soother. And we all know what happens when Philly loses his soother...

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      • braden H
        braden H @Branden Brushett last edited by

        @Branden-Brushett said in Luv WIP:

        It's hard for me to tell the depth; are they in front of the shelves or underneath it

        Interesting! I'll be sure to keep that in mind when I start painting πŸ™‚

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        • braden H
          braden H @Pamela Fraley last edited by

          @Pamela-Fraley said in Luv WIP:

          Pascal Campion is posting some very loose comic sketches along these lines on his Instagram lately

          I checked him out! He's got some really awesome stuff (his little minicomic on ideas and birds blew me away)

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          • braden H
            braden H @Whitney Simms last edited by

            @Whitney-Simms All great ideas :smiling_face_with_open_mouth: thank you! I think I'll stick with the tender moment in this case (though I may explore hiding under the table or negotiating for child-minding priorities in another piece)

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            • avfarrar
              avfarrar @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett Yes. I think that color scheme would best convey the feel.

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              • nasvikdraws
                nasvikdraws last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett OMG I love where this is going! Can't wait for the finished piece πŸ™‚

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                • CukiArtist
                  CukiArtist last edited by

                  This looks so good. My only feedback is I find it a bit odd that the parents are on one side and the children on the other. It takes away from one of your original brain storms of the parents been at the eye of the storm. Unless you are planning it that way for how it would work with text.

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett i love how chaotic this is. I can’t wait to see what you’ll do with it in color. Great job.

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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                      UGG this is so good. I was going to say the color scheme of warm and parents cool is the best one, but you already said it. Great work @Braden-Hallett


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                      • theprairiefox
                        theprairiefox last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett So much fun... so much my house!

                        I love the color study with the cool colors on the parents and warm colors everywhere else. I think it really reinforces what you are going for.

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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett I like the tension of the red overlay colour -red being the obvious love colour and also angry colour at least for me. So in one way the environment is going off the walls madness but the parents don't let this consume their love for their family -two different points of view wrapped up or should I say exploding at the same time! And the parents are successfully staying cool. πŸ™‚

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @CukiArtist last edited by

                            @CukiArtist No text, but in general I like them happily sitting on the right third of the drawing. If i redo the piece (maaaaaaaaaybe?) I'll play with them being a literal eye a storm closer to centre πŸ™‚

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Hokeedokee!

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                              Basic light map (warms and cools the local colour layer)

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                              And from here I'm gonna paint! Push and pull, saturate and desaturate. Reintroduce more of the light colour. Kinda fiddle with it until I'm happier with it. This process gets me to a point where I have ALMOST all the puzzle pieces. Now I just need to assemble it.

                              I have a really hard time with colour. I feel a little like a tone deaf person who's trying to learn scales solely on where to place my fingers. I'm sure someday something'll just click. Just gonna take yet more friggin' practice.

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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett i dig the use of cool colors as a way to focus on the parents

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                                • Kevin Longueil
                                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @braden H last edited by Kevin Longueil

                                  @Braden-Hallett This is looking awesome! I did a quick and hopefully not too annoying cut and paste of my thinking - i do still feel like the parents are possibly too far in the background and may be a different scale than the children? Was thinking a window over the sink might really free you up and allow you to do more things with the lighting in the room - but maybe would change the mood too much? - just a thought though πŸ™‚

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                    @Aleksey Thanks! I'm hoping to reinforce that as i paint πŸ™‚

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                      @Kevin-Longueil Oh wow! I really like the window idea. That would really let me cast a different light on the parents. If I go back and repaint (I think I almost always do πŸ˜‚ ) I'll totally do that.

                                      As for the scale, I think if I put a shadow under the table and put the mum's feet where they should be it'll reinforce where they are in space. We'll see πŸ™‚

                                      Thanks for the paint over :smiling_face_with_open_mouth:

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                                      • xin li
                                        xin li last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett: -Really lovely concept, and very challenging composition to pull off. So well done. @Kevin-Longueil Love the window idea. It really adds so much to the mood.

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @xin li last edited by

                                          @xin-li Thanks! I may, instead of doing a LOT of surgery to add the window, play with some kind of hanging kitchen light. Benefit of the light without having to renovate the kitchen :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

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                                            cbrocke last edited by

                                            This is looking great! I've learned a lot by seeing your process to get to this point!

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