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    • Erin.Cortese
      Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett oh sorry, lol! The concept is awesome!

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      • Whitney Simms
        Whitney Simms SVS OG @braden H last edited by

        @Braden-Hallett they could be negotiating who has to tackle which problem. Like playing poker. Or play Rock Paper Scissors for it. Or the laugh at your self smile, like “I don’t even know where to start.” Or you could make the parents hide under the table holding hands. Let’s pretend they’re not here. This is a very relatable illustration you have started! Although, I’ll keep my kids. They have their moments

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        • Pamela Fraley
          Pamela Fraley SVS OG @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett this is great. Pascal Campion is posting some very loose comic sketches along these lines on his Instagram lately. You should check it out. He’s one of my favorites and he captures the pains and joys of parenting so perfectly. ☺️

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Aaaaaand refined values:

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            Super basic light kinda colour study

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            And finally. Friggin' finally. The step that now takes me the least amount of time which I use to try to get to as soon as friggin' possible, the linework.

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            There's some clusters of tangents and lots of chaotic overlapping, but since it's suppose to FEEL chaotic, frenzied and just an utter cluster#*&^% I'm going to keep them.

            Thanks everyone for your feedback so far 🙂

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            • Erin.Cortese
              Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett Wow, incredible! This composition has such great energy and movement.

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              • evilrobot
                evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                Love this your draftsmanship is top notch.

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                  @inkandspatter Thanks 🙂 Full body screaming fits are always fun to illustrate and easy to make dynamic

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @evilrobot last edited by

                    @evilrobot Thank you 😀 I think the rest of my process and skill set is slowly starting to catch up to my linework

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett always impressive stuff. Cant wait to see how you decide to color it. But dang these parents are so into themselves nothing else matters right now.

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                      • Branden Brushett
                        Branden Brushett @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett OMG. So good! This is going to be a fun one.

                        My only feedback would be where the parents heads are in relation to the bottom of the shelves, along with the cereal boxes. It's hard for me to tell the depth; are they in front of the shelves or underneath it? I know they're in front but my brain was playing tricks on me a bit. Lighting may resolve that.

                        And with the cereal boxes, the focus on the love between the parents two faces might be more clear if the boxes didn't take away from their silhouette? Maybe just leave the box on the left so the back of the dads head is more obvious.

                        Great line work btw!

                        Branden Brushett
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                        • braden H
                          braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                          @Aleksey Thanks 😀 I'm gonna go with the overly wamr colour scheme for the chaos with the nice cool blue in the eye of the storm with the parents.

                          They ARE super into themselves :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: at least until little Danica finds something solid in those cupboards and whips it at Jeremy's face to shut him up. Then Philly's gonna lose his soother. And we all know what happens when Philly loses his soother...

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Branden Brushett last edited by

                            @Branden-Brushett said in Luv WIP:

                            It's hard for me to tell the depth; are they in front of the shelves or underneath it

                            Interesting! I'll be sure to keep that in mind when I start painting 🙂

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                              @Pamela-Fraley said in Luv WIP:

                              Pascal Campion is posting some very loose comic sketches along these lines on his Instagram lately

                              I checked him out! He's got some really awesome stuff (his little minicomic on ideas and birds blew me away)

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Whitney Simms last edited by

                                @Whitney-Simms All great ideas :smiling_face_with_open_mouth: thank you! I think I'll stick with the tender moment in this case (though I may explore hiding under the table or negotiating for child-minding priorities in another piece)

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                                • avfarrar
                                  avfarrar @braden H last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett Yes. I think that color scheme would best convey the feel.

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                                  • nasvikdraws
                                    nasvikdraws last edited by

                                    @Braden-Hallett OMG I love where this is going! Can't wait for the finished piece 🙂

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                                    • CukiArtist
                                      CukiArtist last edited by

                                      This looks so good. My only feedback is I find it a bit odd that the parents are on one side and the children on the other. It takes away from one of your original brain storms of the parents been at the eye of the storm. Unless you are planning it that way for how it would work with text.

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett i love how chaotic this is. I can’t wait to see what you’ll do with it in color. Great job.

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                                        • Chip Valecek
                                          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                          UGG this is so good. I was going to say the color scheme of warm and parents cool is the best one, but you already said it. Great work @Braden-Hallett


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                                          • theprairiefox
                                            theprairiefox last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett So much fun... so much my house!

                                            I love the color study with the cool colors on the parents and warm colors everywhere else. I think it really reinforces what you are going for.

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