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    WIP March book cover composition. Critiques welcome.

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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

      @inkandspatter hmm ok ty ill play around with it a bit more.

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

        @inkandspatter ok I think I figured it out, what do you think of this? You all were right there was a lot of yellow in various parts of it not just the plants and frog.
        42E63088-3F18-41F7-9FD7-45DE913242B6.jpeg

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • Erin.Cortese
          Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Aleksey Yes, it definitely ties in much nicer!

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

            @inkandspatter whew ok. I think I’m done with this.

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • Erin.Cortese
              Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

              @Aleksey I know that feeling! Great work, a lot of beautiful detail!

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              • MichaelaH
                MichaelaH @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @Aleksey You have made it really good, love the arcs in the text and the color is much bette rnow, for me it is finished and perfect 🙂 Great work and progress...ufff

                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                  @MichaelaH @inkandspatter thank you so much
                  And thank you to everyone else that has helped me with all the feedback. I’m so bad with color, I may rewatch that updated color and light class will terry posted to refresh myself.

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • MichaelaH
                    MichaelaH @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @Aleksey I know what You mean, I am bad with color also, I love my sketches, but I am afraid of starting to put the color on it...I am still at the sketch phase with my cover...
                    me too, have to watch the new version of the color and light class.
                    But now, be happy, You have finished this great piece...congrats.

                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                    • Erin.Cortese
                      Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      @Aleksey It’s funny you mention the new class, that’s what I am watching today! I have almost finished all the videos and the class is really great!

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                        @inkandspatter clearly you’ve been able to help me too so I’d have to agree

                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          I like the ripples 🙂

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @MOO last edited by

                            @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen oh thank you! You have no idea how much i hate drawing ripples after this! Although I must admit I got better at it after this.

                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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