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    WIM Book Cover "The Wind in the Willows"

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose @Erin.Cortese last edited by

      @inkandspatter Okay! Cool! I totally see that now. Good advice!

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      • KathrynAdebayo
        KathrynAdebayo last edited by KathrynAdebayo

        Your version with less rocks looks like a finished work to me. So nice. 🙂 Though maybe the value of the bottom of the background trees is a bit strong? This is really looking amazing.

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

          @KathrynAdebayo Cool, I'll try lighting up the background trees and see how it looks 🙂

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            Okay! Working on back now. What you all think? I was thinking about putting in some more elements, but I've been finding this piece likes to be simple. Maybe add a bird or two in the branches?

            Screen Shot 2019-03-19 at 3.38.08 PM.png

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            • Erin.Cortese
              Erin.Cortese Moderator @Elizabeth Rose last edited by Erin.Cortese

              @Squirrelsize Beautiful! Your design is very well thought out and very nicely balanced.

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              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                Yey! I'm getting really excited! This has been a fun piece! Still open to changes however. You all see anything that bothers you that I should change up?

                These are my edits from the last several post:

                I lighted up the background trees on the front cover.
                Switch the willow tree on the back to the right side of the page.
                Put clothes and a tail on Ratty

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                • MichaelaH
                  MichaelaH last edited by

                  It looks really good!!!

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose @MichaelaH last edited by

                    @MichaelaH Hahaha, Thanks 🙂

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                    • djly
                      djly last edited by

                      Wow, I can't believe how far this piece came. You've really worked hard on this and it shows. Really beautiful work, you should be proud!

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                      • Elizabeth Rose
                        Elizabeth Rose @djly last edited by

                        @djly AWE, thanks so much girl!

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                        • Elizabeth Rose
                          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                          This is what my Adobe Illustrator art file looks like right now lol

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