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    Group run through creative environment design week 2 art and feedback

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    • braden H
      braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

      @ErinCortese Wow! If I didn't know better I might think those were run through a photoshop filter! Very very detailed. As long as you learned something, right? ๐Ÿ™‚

      I might do one or two more and see how simple you can get in order to get some practice on the other end of the spectrum.

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      • Erin.Cortese
        Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

        @Braden-Hallett Thank you! Thatโ€™s kind of how I was thinking of it when trying to choose values...basically how would it look if it were greyscale. I may just convert them to see how close I came. I also used Jake Parkerโ€™s suggestion of squinting at them to try and see value, and it definitely works!

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        • braden H
          braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

          @ErinCortese Oh yeah! Squinting is super effective ๐Ÿ™‚ I'm starting to find myself squinting around town just checking out building silhouettes 'n such.

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Welp, the fact that I got aggravated completing this exercise tells me I need to do it more. A LOT more. ๐Ÿ™‚

            Something I noticed is that in these compositions it's not just the shapes that are balanced, but the lights and darks seem to be, too. It's something I wouldn't have thought about if I hadn't done this assignment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett I feel like row 1 number 2 and 3 and row 2 number 3 -have really nice compositions as you have nicely valued them. Some of them definitely look tricky. I will find a variety.

              Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
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              Be blessed,

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett nailed it i think

                instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                alekseyillustration.com

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                • demotlj
                  demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                  I didnโ€™t have much time to work on this this week (Minister + Holy Week = no time for art... or breathing.)

                  I had already done the first four last time I watched the course so I tried to do a little every day to finish up and deliberately used Good Notes instead of Procreate to really severely limit my tools so Iโ€™d keep it loose and quick. It was interesting comparing the โ€œfine artโ€ pieces I had done before to the more classic illustrators I did this time. This is really good practice.

                  770A9DFA-2C30-4887-B57E-0361CAC20D6B.jpeg

                  Laurie DeMott
                  instagram.com/demotlj

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @demotlj last edited by

                    @demotlj Great work! Yeah, this weekend must be crazy busy for you ๐Ÿ™‚

                    That's a really good idea to use a program that limits the amount of detail and value your capable of using. I know that in procreate you can really zoom in, even with something thumbnail sized, so using goodnotes was just smart ๐Ÿ™‚

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                    • murielle
                      murielle @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                      @ErinCortese These are absolutely stunning ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

                      http://artbymurielle.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        Started a thread for week 3!

                        https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/7399/group-run-through-creative-environment-design-week-3-art-and-feedback

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Once again, If anyone here wants more critiquey feedback on their work, post it and tag me with an @ and I'll give you a short critique.

                          If you want a critique but DON'T wanna post it here for whatever reason feel free to PM me on these forums or DM me on discord ๐Ÿ™‚

                          I don't feel AS comfortable critiquing these, but I'll do my best!

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                          • Erin.Cortese
                            Erin.Cortese Moderator @murielle last edited by

                            @murielle Thank you!

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                            • Heather Boyd
                              Heather Boyd last edited by

                              Week 2 just finished up. Challenging, some were more helpful in visualising than others.

                              CEDC Workbook 01-6 FINAL part 1.jpg

                              CEDC Workbook 01-5 FINAL VLAUE part2.jpg

                              Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
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                              Be blessed,

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                              • Nathalie Kranich
                                Nathalie Kranich @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett You do so well on all these exercises __ amazing stuff.

                                www.nathaliekranich.com
                                https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                                https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                                • Nathalie Kranich
                                  Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                  Very belated week 2 attempt ๐Ÿ™‚

                                  valueStudies1 copy.jpg

                                  www.nathaliekranich.com
                                  https://www.artstation.com/nathaliekranich
                                  https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                    @Nathalie-Kranich Nice work! Looks to me like you nailed it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                                    • Erin.Cortese
                                      Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                      @Nathalie-Kranich These are great, your values look spot on!

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                                      • Heather Boyd
                                        Heather Boyd @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                        @Nathalie-Kranich Pretty wow wow!

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                                        Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                                        Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
                                        Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

                                        Be blessed,

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                                        • Nathalie Kranich
                                          Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                          @Heather-Boyd @Erin-Cortese @Braden-Hallett thank you guyys, I swear I spent four times as long trying to find images to copy than I did copying them. How was your process for that, and where did you lot look for masters to study? I just sort of went with 'stuff I like ' but I'm not sure if there's a better educated way of determining what is worth studying ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

                                          www.nathaliekranich.com
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                                          https://www.instagram.com/nathalie.kranich/?hl=en

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                                          • Erin.Cortese
                                            Erin.Cortese Moderator @Nathalie Kranich last edited by

                                            @Nathalie-Kranich I chose mine based on a variety of things, but they were all compositions that I either liked or had styles I want to experiment with in the future. Many, if not all of the compositions were ones that I already had saved on Instagram, or were taken directly from people I follow. I had so many saved to choose from that I narrowed it down based on wide format and different levels of detail.

                                            I learned a lot doing it this way - one of the more detailed ones I did, I absolutely hated doing. It came from an artist who does environments that I thought I would love doing, and now I know I have absolutely no desire to work in that style. I learned things like that from the other thumbnails too.

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