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    Group run through creative environment design week 5 art and feedback

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    • JerrySketchyArt
      JerrySketchyArt last edited by JerrySketchyArt

      Composition and value study with my trusty "giant wobbly no details allowed brush." Noticing now that I made that background tower too prominent. Noted...

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      • Erin.Cortese
        Erin.Cortese Moderator @JerrySketchyArt last edited by Erin.Cortese

        @JerrySketchyArt Wow, composition and colour value! This looks great.

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        • braden H
          braden H @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

          @JerrySketchyArt Nice! I think you did a good job of capturing the mood 'n values 'n such.

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          • Erin.Cortese
            Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by Erin.Cortese

            Here is my subjective master study, I worked my butt off on this one! I really love this environment, so I decided to challenge myself and go pretty detailed. Out of habit I started sketching in an orange pencil, so I just stuck with it and did my values with it too.

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            • demotlj
              demotlj SVS OG @Erin.Cortese last edited by

              @Erin-Cortese Wow! This is great and I will definitely have to step up my game πŸ™‚

              Laurie DeMott
              instagram.com/demotlj

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              • Coley
                Coley @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                @Erin-Cortese fabulous !

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • braden H
                  braden H last edited by

                  New thread's up!

                  https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/7492/group-run-through-creative-environment-design-week-6-art-and-feedback

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                  • Susan Marks
                    Susan Marks @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                    @JerrySketchyArt Excellently done. I like your choice of simplified colors. And I like the look of the "giant wobbly brush w/o details!"

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                      I tried to limit myself with values and not use any lines. I am amazed at how it ended up feeling. Contrast is a powerful tool...

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                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        @Aleksey I love it!

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                        Be blessed,

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @Heather Boyd last edited by

                          @Heather-Boyd ty! I am surprised at how amazing that grid is

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                          • Heather Boyd
                            Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                            @Aleksey what do you mean? Like how the grid helped you draw?

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                            Be blessed,

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey @Heather Boyd last edited by

                              @Heather-Boyd yes! Lined things up well with it

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                              • Heather Boyd
                                Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @Aleksey Yes I found it incredibly helpful with my Master Copy in Creative Composition Class.

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                                • Susan Marks
                                  Susan Marks @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                  @Aleksey This is awesome how strongly the image is portrayed by values alone.

                                  There's a lesson here, right? πŸ™‚

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey @Susan Marks last edited by

                                    @Susan-Marks yeah i am too lazy to color πŸ˜›

                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • demotlj
                                      demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                      Mine is not nearly as detailed as all of yours but I chose it because I have tried to figure out how to do night scenes without having them become too drab and murky, and I liked the colors and atmosphere in this scene from a book by Lita Judge so I decided to give it a try.

                                      Here’s the original
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                                      Here’s my copy:
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                                      Laurie DeMott
                                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @demotlj last edited by

                                        @demotlj Nice! I think you did a really good job capturing the atmosphere and overall feeling πŸ˜ƒ

                                        Did you learn anything in particular about rendering night scenes?

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                                        • Heather Boyd
                                          Heather Boyd last edited by

                                          Since I will being doing this next week, is subjective drawing looking at colour, brush stroke, lightening what else and how should I approach it?

                                          Thanks

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                                          • demotlj
                                            demotlj SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett That's a really good question. Before I did this, I would have done night scenes using purples or grays, but was surprised that she really stuck to pretty saturated blues that were mostly of the same hue but in different values. Her whole piece used an extremely limited palette -- although I did it digitally, if I had been doing it in watercolor, I could have done it all with just a cool blue and a warm rust (and the yellow at the window). Even the owls were a very light value blue and rust. Colors are more muted at night so that would make sense.

                                            Design-wise, she didn't use any perfectly straight lines which is something I struggle with all of the time. I tend to want to over-control my lines which leaves things stiff.

                                            Laurie DeMott
                                            instagram.com/demotlj

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