MerRetirees...hahaha
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More work on the background. I am wondering if this may be a stronger piece than my merman that I already posted. I don't know at this point.
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Here is some more progress. I really like the umbrella. I am not sure I captured the light and shadow under the umbrella but when I darkened the faces of the mergrannies under the umbrella it looked weird, so I lightened up their backs instead. Did that work?
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@chrisaakins You have such great depth in this composition! I am tempted to say that you could push the shadows further on the grannies under the umbrella, but I also think it works the way you ha e them now.
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@Erin-Cortese thank you so much! I am genuinely surprised by how much depth I created, but I was hearing @Will-Terry's voice in my head as I worked on the values in the background. I never realized how much a difference graying down the values worked or going big to little. I am so thankful for the composition 2.0 class.
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I love it. I still think that potted plant looks out of place though. It’s the only one that’s in a planter.
You could get rid of it and move those bush plants forwards so that the ubrella table line isnt tangential with the bottom of the bushes. What you think?
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I really like your painting. There's so much to see, I love the contrast between the fat, sunburned merman and the skinny merman on the stretcher in the back! I agree with @Aleksey about the potted plant though, I'm not sure you actually need anything in that corner, the plant looks a bit busy against the bushes behind it. Maybe just some details in the floortiles, or cracks in the pavement would do the trick of filling the negative space?
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@Aleksey @Annemieke okay okay! You win! No potted plant. Hahaha. I love the idea about more texture and cracked tiles. I will work on fixing the tangents too. Thank you for your words of encouragement. It makes me happy that you are enjoying this picture.
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@chrisaakins oh yeah it’s a good piece. Careful with where you put the cracks you don’t wanna draw attention from your focal point.
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I think I am done.... Maybe? I know there are a few places where there are some minor tangents but I don't want to do all the work to fix them, if you know what I mean. Any glaring unforgivable things that are sticking out?
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@chrisaakins This is a really fun piece, I love the colours and of course the depth. There is one area that is really bugging me though, and it is the ground as it moves toward the grannies in the back. It seems askew - so much so that it makes me feel a bit dizzy to look at. It looks as though the ground slopes up and to the right.
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@Erin-Cortese Yep. I see it now. I messed up the cracks. I will fix it.
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@chrisaakins crack down on that! No? Anyone? Ok
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