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    Group run through creative environment design week 5 art and feedback

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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @Heather Boyd last edited by

      @Heather-Boyd yes! Lined things up well with it

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @Aleksey Yes I found it incredibly helpful with my Master Copy in Creative Composition Class.

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        • Susan Marks
          Susan Marks @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @Aleksey This is awesome how strongly the image is portrayed by values alone.

          There's a lesson here, right? πŸ™‚

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @Susan Marks last edited by

            @Susan-Marks yeah i am too lazy to color πŸ˜›

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            • demotlj
              demotlj SVS OG last edited by

              Mine is not nearly as detailed as all of yours but I chose it because I have tried to figure out how to do night scenes without having them become too drab and murky, and I liked the colors and atmosphere in this scene from a book by Lita Judge so I decided to give it a try.

              Here’s the original
              E6211C38-1A79-437B-B3FA-A3873F3B7FB5.jpeg

              Here’s my copy:
              94E41AA9-39E4-4D1F-9961-F1E4BB458D17.jpeg

              Laurie DeMott
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              • braden H
                braden H @demotlj last edited by

                @demotlj Nice! I think you did a really good job capturing the atmosphere and overall feeling πŸ˜ƒ

                Did you learn anything in particular about rendering night scenes?

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                • Heather Boyd
                  Heather Boyd last edited by

                  Since I will being doing this next week, is subjective drawing looking at colour, brush stroke, lightening what else and how should I approach it?

                  Thanks

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett That's a really good question. Before I did this, I would have done night scenes using purples or grays, but was surprised that she really stuck to pretty saturated blues that were mostly of the same hue but in different values. Her whole piece used an extremely limited palette -- although I did it digitally, if I had been doing it in watercolor, I could have done it all with just a cool blue and a warm rust (and the yellow at the window). Even the owls were a very light value blue and rust. Colors are more muted at night so that would make sense.

                    Design-wise, she didn't use any perfectly straight lines which is something I struggle with all of the time. I tend to want to over-control my lines which leaves things stiff.

                    Laurie DeMott
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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      I'm playin' catch up!

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                        @Heather-Boyd

                        A subjective background has more to do with feeling right rather than technical accuracy, so the study (I think) focuses more on the values and composition and what makes the environment feel the way it does (happy, safe, sinister, dangerous, etc)

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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by Heather Boyd

                          @Braden-Hallett

                          So colour choice is important here then? I have trouble choosing colour but I can’t take the colour class -I have too many classes inline lols.

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                            @Heather-Boyd The workbook says 'composition and values, paying close attention to core shapes and proportions'.

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                            • Heather Boyd
                              Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett

                              Alright a t bit sad but that’s what it says I will practise that.

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                              • Heather Boyd
                                Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd

                                So my first Subjective Master Copy - I really loved this work -artist I don't know. But love the lighting and atmosphere - colour too but I did it in b/w. To understand the right values I selected the colours and dragged them to the b/w side to learn what value they used where as well as squinting. The other study will be a bit more kid friendly. πŸ™‚

                                CEDC Workbook 02-5 Drawing 01 new.jpg

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                                • Heather Boyd
                                  Heather Boyd last edited by

                                  Only doing 2 Subjective Drawings - still trying to figure out if I am even doing it right.

                                  CEDC Workbook 02-5 Drawing 02_bak.jpg

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                                  Be blessed,

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                    @Heather-Boyd

                                    If you revisit the videos, the point where Jake explains all the homework is at about the 50 minute mark in the 'reference' video.

                                    But I'm pretty sure you're doing fine πŸ™‚

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                                    • Coley
                                      Coley last edited by

                                      week 5 subjectivestudy.jpg

                                      I started a different one than this but realized after (after I had a ton of work into it!) that it was more objective than subjective, I was being all picky with details. And I wasn't finished and it was taking forever! So I just threw this one together for the subjective study, focusing on color and atmosphere and shapes and not too mmuch on anything else! I really like the purply orangish combo πŸ™‚ also, purply is a fun word to say over and over ha ha

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                                      • Heather Boyd
                                        Heather Boyd last edited by

                                        @Coley Anticipating seeing more πŸ™‚ I know you are working on the Mermay though.

                                        So I needed to practise step by steps. I colour swatch dotes by eye and added them to the overlay top right and then colour swatch the original and noticed I missed the dark shadow which was a deep teal and not brown (nice surprise) . So I moved over to the largest and eye balled it again with what I picked up from everything I had done. Would the original have been done in a oil brush?

                                        Original

                                        Colour Composition Rough Image 02.jpg

                                        Original top left.

                                        Colour Composition Subjective tiny bw 01.jpg

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                                        • Coley
                                          Coley @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                          @Heather-Boyd nice work πŸ™‚ It is really cool how one is surprised and learns so much from that color picking/trying to match etc.....I sure am learning a bit lately from doing that. Always surprised!
                                          Mermay is nearly killing me lol!

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                            @Heather-Boyd Colour matching that way really does help a LOT. I'm always surprised at wrong I am when it comes to picking colours πŸ™‚ it's almost never blue, just grey!)

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