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    Group run through creative environment design week 6 art and feedback

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    • Susan Marks
      Susan Marks @ArtofAleksey last edited by

      @Aleksey Glaciers hadn't occurred to me. And good points that when you do these value studies, the shapes that you see may be representing a consistent value, but the shape could be made up of multiple things (i.e. the top border of buildings and trees could make a single shape).

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @Susan Marks last edited by

        @Susan-Marks yeah. I treat them as a place holder and try not to lose track of them.

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • JerrySketchyArt
          JerrySketchyArt last edited by JerrySketchyArt

          Mine ended up as an interior scene. This is for a game about a grumpy pizza delivery guy who hates his job. Sketch phase:

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

            @JerrySketchyArt are you going with this perspective view?

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • JerrySketchyArt
              JerrySketchyArt @ArtofAleksey last edited by

              @Aleksey Nah. I've already decided I don't like the angle and need to rotate it a bit so it's not so straight on. Might do an outside view. Time for more thumbnails. šŸ˜›

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                I dd a very objective view of things before I realized that this was the subjective final (woops!) so I'll post my subjective final tomorrow (gonna do things a little bit backwards)

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                • demotlj
                  demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                  I’m doing a picture of a dancing bison and wanted to push myself on doing interiors so thought I’d do it for this assignment. Here is what I have so far with both the interior and some really really rough ā€œplaceholdersā€ for characters and furnishings. I’m not worried about developing the characters yet since the assignment is really about the environment design - just wanted to make sure things would fit - but I’m assuming that I should think about lighting and stuff, right? Or is it subjective already because it’s only showing part of the room?

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                  Laurie DeMott
                  instagram.com/demotlj

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey @demotlj last edited by

                    @demotlj good choice on the low angle makes the bison look much bigger.

                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey last edited by

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                      I think I’m onto something with the values.

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        Okeedokee! I finally get to play in my local DND game, so I'm all into the generic fantasy settings. I may finish this one day!

                        The puzzle pieces I'm trying to juggle: Composition (thirds and fifths) silhouette, balance, proportion (thirds and fifths again) and value. Are there any principles I'm forgetting off the top of my head?

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                        • JerrySketchyArt
                          JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                          Planning to paint this eventually, but since this class is on design I'm going to call this homework complete.

                          Side note: The odd cropping and extra space on the outside are due to game design best practices. We have to plan for a wide range of aspect ratios (think ultra wide screen vs an old 4:3 TV screen) which can shift the visible area by a decent bit.

                          CED_Workbook2_Page_6 complete.png

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                          • JerrySketchyArt
                            JerrySketchyArt @demotlj last edited by

                            @demotlj This is a really nice scene! Even with scribbled in characters the story is really there. I think the floor tiles should be larger in the middle and get closer together as you go out though.

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                            • demotlj
                              demotlj SVS OG @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                              @JerrySketchyArt I assume you mean the horizontal floor lines not the vertical ones. The tiles against the far wall are much smaller than those in front but I didn't increase the size evenly as they come closer. I'll have to fix that.

                              Laurie DeMott
                              instagram.com/demotlj

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                              • JerrySketchyArt
                                JerrySketchyArt @demotlj last edited by

                                @demotlj Both lines should get closer together as distance from the viewer increases. The ones in front of the camera should be the most square. Example:

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                                • demotlj
                                  demotlj SVS OG @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                                  @JerrySketchyArt On the vertical lines, I just followed the Procreate perspective tool so those should be right but the perspective tool doesn't space the horizontal lines and I admit I was just eying that... badly! (Some of it may be that I wasn't thinking of the tiles as being square but as rectangular.)

                                  Laurie DeMott
                                  instagram.com/demotlj

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                                  • JerrySketchyArt
                                    JerrySketchyArt @demotlj last edited by

                                    @demotlj I'm yet to find a good tool for quickly creating grid lines. Clip Studio has perspective rulers too, but it doesn't force proper spacing either. Argh! My solution is to find/make a checkered square grid. Import that grid and do a "free transform" into the shape of the floor/wall/ceiling/whatever. Then you can use that as a guide for your marks. šŸ™‚ If you want more rectangular lines just add an extra line down the middle. Example over your drawing:

                                    (Random grid from google)
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                                    Free Transform to match floor/wall lines
                                    floor grid.png

                                    Draw lines with grid for better estimation
                                    floor grid marks.png

                                    Rectangular floor tiles in perspective
                                    floor grid fixed.png

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                                    • demotlj
                                      demotlj SVS OG @JerrySketchyArt last edited by demotlj

                                      @JerrySketchyArt That does look better. I think the problem is that the perspective lines aren't supposed to be used for spacing like I was doing whereas your method keeps that spacing. Thanks -- I'm going to try that.

                                      Laurie DeMott
                                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                                      • demotlj
                                        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                        I’m going to call this done. It’s still very rough (don’t look at it too closely) and I will add other characters, tweak the placement of things, and improve the line art but for this exercise, I think this is as far as I need to go. I really had to think about interior design more than I ever have before so it was really a helpful exercise.
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                                        Laurie DeMott
                                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                                        • Coley
                                          Coley last edited by

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                                          starting my subjective final. I decided on doing an interior just because it moved me when I had the idea lol. I had the idea of doing something that I would have loved as a kid. and that was to have a window in my room that opened to either a paddock or a stall for my pony! So these are my thumbnail ideas. Very open to feedback! I tried to keep perspective and rule if thirds etc in mind but I have been struggling with it too. new to all this. any advice appreciated. p.s. am online now watching the live event! exciting!

                                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @Coley last edited by

                                            @Coley Neat! What kind of mood or feeling are you goin' for?

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