Halloween illustration WIP

[Naroth Kean]

I really like it! this is very cute XD because he is carving his the boy face out of the pumpkin. I think the new composition is great. It's going to be awesome!

[Thrace]

@NoWayMe it looks awesome! One little thing though, I like the old mouth on the boy much better than the new one. The new one just doesn't look right to me. Just my opinion wait and see what others think. Can't wait for you to paint it!!

[Leontine]

Its a really nice piece! Cant wait to see the colors appearing! I agree With @Thrace-Shirley-Mears about the mouth.

[NoWayMe]

Thank you all for the comments! I'll re-modify the mouth, I think it's the tongue... anyway it's true it looked better before!

[Naroth Kean]

one thing I have to point out, it's the candle that shit right in mid of the illustration. I would move it back a bit so it sits behind and between the boy and the monster to the right. Now It divides the page and stops the flow of the composition. Again lovely piece!

[shinjifujioka]

@Naroth-Kean Uh...what exactly is that candle doing?? Not sure it's "stopping the flow", if you know what I mean. Hahahahaha, sorry. I'm still 12 years old.

[Naroth Kean]

@shinjifujioka Shinji I'm only 5 :D. I think Will did that by moving it to the back a bit but I think it's better without the candles since you already have one light source from the table. I'm worried that the candles will looks very hot on the boy hair. Here I removed it, just a thought

[Thrace]

You could move candle to the other side of the chair and then it wouldn't interfere.

[Naroth Kean]

@shinjifujioka yeah i flipped to my own mistake LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL "shit" i'm sorry I mean "sit"

[NoWayMe]

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears Yes! I will definitely do that! Now that @Naroth Kean pointed that out, it's the only thing I am seeing when looking at my drawing!! It couldn't be more "in the middle"! However, I really want to keep it in the illustration because I want it to be my primary light source (since the boy is my focal point).

[NoWayMe]

I think this is better!

[Ace Connell]

@NoWayMe Yup - tons better! I'm looking forward to seeing this finished... even if it is too late for Halloween haha.

Ace

[NoWayMe]

@Ace-Connell Hahaha! It will probably be done it time for Christmas...

[Ace Connell]

@NoWayMe There's always next Halloween

[NoWayMe]

I started the painting phase of my illustration with a value study. I tried to clearly have the boy in focus, and then the carving vampire as a secondary focal point.

I have to disclose that I have never done a fully rendered illustration on photoshop before! I usually work traditionally (mostly in soft pastels) so I'm walking in the dark a little bit here! Hope it is going to turn out good! Critiques are of course more than welcome!

[Ace Connell]

Personally, I'd try and work in more contrast between the foreground of the dude with the awesome beard carving the pumpkin and the rest of the scene so you get that real sense of dimension.

Hope that helps a little
Ace

[NoWayMe]

Still working values, and slowly adding details!

[NoWayMe]

Hello again!

I am starting to add colors to this illustration and I would really appreciate any feedback you guys can give me! Of course it is still very rough, but I would rather have feedback at this early stage, when it is still relatively easy to modify things!

Thanks in advance!

[Kevin Longueil]

This is such an excellent piece! Love it!....there is something about the original drawing of the boy's face that i like so i thought i would try to figure out what it is - i think it is the eyebrow mostly and then the curve of the mouth in two places .....possibly the larger tongue and smaller pupils in the first one too but I'm not sure about those - lastly the teeth recede i size on the original but not yet in the painting (on our left) it is such a subtle difference but i think the boys expression in the original drawing has a bit more magic to it - what do you think?

[NoWayMe]

@Kevin-Longueil Thanks again for such an helping comment! You're absolutely right that I am losing the boy's expression, I will definitely work on that! I am going to take advantage of your always extremely helpful comments... do you have any thoughts on colors for me ?? I know everything is fairly messy right now, I have changed the colors so many times I stopped counting! I am trying to limit my palette, but at the same time, the monsters need a little color! I feel like the pink monsters is stealing the focus a little to much... what do you think ?