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    Making Narrative pieces- Tortoise and the Hare project

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

      @jthomas thanks! Definitely noted.

      @StudioLooong thank you!

      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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      • lenwen
        lenwen last edited by

        I feel you! I really love your designs and they look so much fun!
        I also love your color scheme 🙂

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        • Johanna Kim
          Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by

          Such good advice and I love your story twist idea!

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          • MichaelaH
            MichaelaH @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

            @nyrrylcadiz I like the characters and the flying stones (meteors) have more deep in values, than the characters, the hare the most, is missing some dark values.

            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

              Here’s an update! I feel that it’s done. Ok, I’m ready to move on to the next.

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              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • animatosoor
                animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                @nyrrylcadiz It made me happy to see this update! Great piece, and great idea overall. I can't wait to see more of your progress on this project.

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                  @lenwen @Johanna-Kim @MichaelaH @animatosoor thank you!

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • Coley
                    Coley @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @nyrrylcadiz cool, I missed this thread before now but I love love your artwork!

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @nyrrylcadiz The rabbit very much reminds of me Zap Brannigan from Futurama 🙂 so I think you nailed his attitude.

                      Best detail for me is the fact that the turtle is wearing his suit underneath his shell. Awesome design!

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                      • Johanna Kim
                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                        @nyrrylcadiz This turned out so awesome! Looking forward to seeing how this series progresses.

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett lol! Hahahahahahafhaahaahahahahhahha! 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣 it’s funny you mentioned that coz I always thought that hare looked like Fry! But yes his obnoxious confidence does remind me of Zap! I was even planning to do a Fry meme with Hare instead. Hehe

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                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                          • Corlette Douglas
                            Corlette Douglas last edited by

                            I love the colors you used for the piece , my eyes instantly know where to look. It's adorable 🙂

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                              JennyJones last edited by

                              @nyrrylcadiz I (like @Braden-Hallett ) was going to say that my favorite thing was the turtle and how he looks like he had to put his shell on over his clothes. He’s such a round and super cute guy! I look forward to seeing more pieces from this project. It’s a fun concept.

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                              • Jorge Valentin
                                Jorge Valentin last edited by

                                Woah awesome work! I really your design process on this. The characters are adorable, especially the tortoise, love how he turned out. I'm interested in seeing how you illustrate the rest.

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                                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                                  Here’s another update! I still have a lot to do but I just want to show you guys where I’m at. Any thoughts? I’d be happy to hear them. Thanks.

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                                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                                    @Coley @Corlette-Douglas @JennyJones @Jorge-Valentin thank you!

                                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                    • Jessica Jolicoeur
                                      Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                      @nyrrylcadiz

                                      I think it looks great. I love narrative pieces and I think you have a great thing going here.
                                      Can I ask what you use to illustrate?
                                      I am a traditional artist using color pencil, watercolor and graphite at this point and painting in acrylic but I feel that it might be a good idea for me to start using a digital platform for my work.

                                      I love the concept of your current project and I think you have a strong sense of what you are communicating.
                                      I can imagine this being interesting to kids.

                                      Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                        @Jessica-Jolicoeur hi! I’m using Procreate on my ipad

                                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                        • Jessica Jolicoeur
                                          Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                          @nyrrylcadiz

                                          I have been doing research and I have heard about procreate quite a bit.
                                          I love traditional media so I am reluctant to get into a digital format but I also want to see what I could do with it.
                                          Thank you.

                                          Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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                                            JennyJones @Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

                                            @Jessica-Jolicoeur I use Procreate for all my digital stuff too. It’s very user friendly and the brushes can look pretty traditional. I work to try to get my digital work to look as traditional as possible and I feel like Procreate it easy to use in a “traditional “ way or with masks and zillions of layers. Lots of tutorials out there on YouTube,Skillshare, and through Procreate itself. Go for it!

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