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    Godzilla WIP. Feedback always welcome!

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      A Former User last edited by

      I love looking through your process of creating this piece! It's definitely a strong one! I really enjoy those two kids fighting over the remote.

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      • theprairiefox
        theprairiefox last edited by

        @Braden-Hallett love how it is coming out... but something is not quite right with the colors. Unfortunately, I am not good enough to know what!?!?! It is driving me crazy.

        I wonder if you changed the robot's plug to a neon (nuclear?) green instead of the red. I think the warm colors are over powering it.

        I am sorry I can't pinpoint it. Something just feels off though.

        Oh, on a side note, the texture on the robot's metal looks great the way you did it! Came through beautifully and is not distracting at all.

        -The Prairie Fox
        https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
        https://www.theprairiefox.com

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        • Darian
          Darian SVS OG last edited by

          I think I'm loving it @Braden-Hallett . Just one thing, can the circular red object be lowered in saturation or removed? I think it takes the attention away from the focal point.

          Awesome process as well! Do you have a range of colors to pick from when going from grays to color? I find this process challenging for me : |

          Great going..would love to see it finished!

          https://www.instagram.com/darian.pereira
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            braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

            @Heather-Boyd I may be slightly colour blind. He looks blue to me :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: Either that or my monitor's not properly calibrated.

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            • braden H
              braden H @bnewman last edited by

              @bnewman Thanks 😃 I am indeed done with the sky. I really want it to look like the city's being actively trashed. Lot's of fire 'n glowy smoke.

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              • braden H
                braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                @theprairiefox Something's always not quite right my my colours 🙂 I'm hoping with time and practice they'll be less likely to feel off. Either that or I need to steal more colour schemes :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

                I think you and @Darian are right, though, the red's way too much. I think the same grey as the rest of the robot innards'll work better.

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Darian last edited by

                  @Darian Thanks! Right now the only thing I try to do all the time when it comes to colour is make sure I explore as many options as possible before committing (hence the several random colour studies). I try to keep things low-mid saturated so I have places to go and it's more likely to harmonize.

                  Other than that, everyone's got so much advice when it comes to colour it's hard to keep it all in the air. I either try to keep it as analogous as I can or I find someone else's work that has the colour scheme I like and 'borrow heavily'. I'm still tryin' to figure colour out 🙂

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by braden H

                    I missed the description on the contest page that says 'design a Kaiju to contend with godzilla' 😄 Not a Kaiju. Don't care. Still gonna submit 🙂 For every giant monster there's almost always a giant robot anyways.

                    I'm gonna sit on it 'til tomorrow and after maybe a couple more minor changes I'll send it off.

                    Thanks to everyone for the feedback! This is always an awesome learning experience.

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                    • lmrush
                      lmrush Pro SVS OG @braden H last edited by lmrush

                      @Braden-Hallett Monster is a loose term, I think it counts, my boy as a toddler could be termed a monster on some days Lol Fantastic piece!!!!

                      Lisa Rush
                      www.lisarushgallery.com
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                      • theprairiefox
                        theprairiefox @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett I like that much more... nice improvements.

                        -The Prairie Fox
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                        https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                        • StudioLooong
                          StudioLooong @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett oops, I didn't read that part either... hopefully they are okay with more loose interpretations cuz this is an awesome piece.

                          Taylor Woolley
                          (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


                          Website: www.woolleystories.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @StudioLooong last edited by

                            @StudioLooong I'm not worried about it 🙂 Worst case scenario I get a pretty picture and a nice lesson about reading the whole prompt a tad more carefull :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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                            • Washu
                              Washu SVS OG last edited by

                              I saw this in the contest thread and my first thought was "What are you doing here!? (at SVS) Go make comics!" haha This piece is on the level. ❤

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Washu last edited by

                                @Washu Thanks 😃 That's some high praise. I'm here for the same reason everyone else is, just workin' on those basics and buildin' upa . portfolio 🙂

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                                • Washu
                                  Washu SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett Really? I pretty much just lurk here. 😉 I'm crossing my fingers that a robot counts as a kaiju.

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