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    July Prompt- Don’t want to post this one first

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    • cameroncole
      cameroncole last edited by

      Hey everybody,

      I don’t want to be the first to post in the finished July thread due to the unpleasant nature of my illustration. I would much rather have mine down in the thread after some more fun and whimsical illustrations.
      With that said- Nothing would ruin a summer vacation like a flat tire during a zombie apocalypse. I think the car turned out pretty good. I suck at cars. If you have a moment- let me know what you think.

      Utmost,
      Cameron

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      https://cameroncoleart.com/

      NessIllustration Chip Valecek Erin.Cortese 3 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 5
      • NessIllustration
        NessIllustration Pro @cameroncole last edited by

        @cameroncole This is a nice illustration! The first person to post always gets seen the most. So if you are proud of your work, hurry up and snag that spot! The "unpleasant nature" really doesn't matter, plus I think it's actually a fun illustration, not unpleasant at all!Be comfortable with showing it to the world 🙂

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @cameroncole last edited by

          @cameroncole I think its a fun piece. I do have a few suggestions. There is a lot of green going on and then you have that red cooler on the ground. That is the focal point for me right now. What if you made the car red? That would draw everyones eye to the car and then the movement around the car is perfect. One other thing is that your horizon line is almost inline with the bottom of the car windows. Maybe move it even lower?


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          • StudioLooong
            StudioLooong last edited by

            Lol this is great, it has good humor to it. I have a feeling a lot of them are going to have a bit of an unpleasantness about them this month, go ahead and post it!

            Taylor Woolley
            (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


            Website: www.woolleystories.com
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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            • Erin.Cortese
              Erin.Cortese Moderator @cameroncole last edited by Erin.Cortese

              @cameroncole This piece is a lot of fun! All of the characters have a good amount of personality and interest. The car is great.

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                A Former User last edited by

                @cameroncole I like the way the Mum is just chilling sat in her chair...you get the feeling that if the son and father can't handle it then she can and it would involve that umbrella!! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: Great pic! p.s maybe change the colour of the car so it doesnt blend in with the background like @Chip-Valecek suggested?😇 👍

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