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    Process on work for my portfolio (ongoing)

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      A Former User @MichaelaH last edited by

      @MichaelaH That's flows much better in my opinion πŸ™‚ You may want to lose the line "Flip didn't wait etc" and maybe have something like:

      "Ohhh, ohhh do you know this one?" Flip asked "Why don't bears like fast food?"

      Berry started to think, but before he could answer-
      "Because they can't catch it!" Flip blurted out as he splashed around in a fit of giggles.

      That's only an idea anyway, I'm not the best at writing so it's totally what you're happy with and what you think flows well πŸ™‚

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        MichaelaH @Guest last edited by

        @hannahmccaffery Thank You, hope it is ok, I will use Your text, I like it a lot. Thank You for your help.

        fisch_und_baer.jpg

        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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          A Former User last edited by

          Fab! Are you happy with it as that's the important thing? πŸ™‚ I think the text gives Flip more of personality now and I would love to see more of these characters πŸ˜ƒ

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            MichaelaH @Guest last edited by

            @hannahmccaffery I am very happy with it, thank You so much. Yeah I am thinking about drawing one more picture to this story

            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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              MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

              Working on July contest, have two thumbnails

              Thumbnail A
              Zeichnen_July vacation 0b.jpg

              Thumbnail B
              Zeichnen_July vacation 0a.jpg

              https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
              https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                MichaelaH last edited by

                Now better sketch finished:
                2019-07-18_232251.jpg

                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                  MichaelaH last edited by

                  Between work for fun - challange #aggressivesloth by @jimbobdrawingshow on instagram.
                  Hyrax taking its time eating leaves in the mean time sloth is going slowly in aggressive mode

                  aggressivesloth-process.jpg

                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                    MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                    I am as @Aleksey patreon from mitchleeuwe and he gave me feedback to try my composition to show from lower angle. Here than two rough sketches in comparison.

                    Zeichnen_July vacation comparison.jpg

                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                      ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                      @MichaelaH oh yeah much better puts you right into the scene

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                        MichaelaH last edited by

                        Now gonna do some coloring

                        2019-07-26_211738.jpg

                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                          MichaelaH last edited by

                          Changed the raccoon, taht he is also moving

                          2019-07-27_103730.jpg

                          https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                          https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                            MichaelaH last edited by

                            Next llustration finished, I put some more process here. I didn't do color study.

                            when-vacation-goes-wrong-process.jpg

                            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                              BichonBistro @MichaelaH last edited by BichonBistro

                              @MichaelaH P.S. Your signature is so perfect for the children’s book market 😊

                              https://www.instagram.com/bichonbistro
                              http://www.heartfeltimpressions.com
                              https://www.facebook.com/patty.burke.9655
                              https://twitter.com/BichonBistro

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                                MichaelaH @BichonBistro last edited by

                                @BichonBistro Thank You, I love mouse so πŸ™‚ 🐭

                                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                  MichaelaH last edited by

                                  The publishers I am in contact with like my animals, but say I still have to work on human/kids, so last week and this week I did the daily exercise:

                                  daily20190803c.jpg

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                                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                    MichaelaH last edited by

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                                    daily20190823big (Individuell).jpg
                                    daily20190830 (Individuell).jpg

                                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                      BichonBistro @MichaelaH last edited by

                                      @MichaelaH I will always love your imaginative animals best but your humans are fabulous too!

                                      https://www.instagram.com/bichonbistro
                                      http://www.heartfeltimpressions.com
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                                      https://twitter.com/BichonBistro

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                                        MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                                        @BichonBistro Thank You so much for liking my work πŸ€—

                                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                          Amanda Jean last edited by

                                          Did they specify what you needed to improve with your humans? I think some of them are pretty good, and that last one is great! Life drawing really helps this stuff, if you can't get to a class, just get to a busy area and do some gestures for 30-60 minutes. You will be amazed how much you can pick up and how it translates to your work after a little while.

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                                            MichaelaH @Amanda Jean last edited by

                                            @Amanda-Jean I almost never draw ppl, only animals, so I think they didn't like this less amount of ppl I ever drew to that point, I liked to draw animals more, but now I like ppl also. I never really exercised ppl before. I am going to frankfurt book fair this october and I will get feedback there, I will take my new ppl illustrations also with me.

                                            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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