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    • MichaelaH
      MichaelaH @Guest last edited by

      @hannahmccaffery Thank You Hannah, really appreciate your help with the text. I will change it.

      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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      • MichaelaH
        MichaelaH @Guest last edited by

        @hannahmccaffery What about this?:

        „Ohhh, ohhh you know this one?“

        Flip din‘t wait for the bear to answer and started to tell its joke:
        „Why don't bears like fast food?“

        Berry started to think, but before he could answer...
        „Because they can't catch it!“

        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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        • ?
          A Former User @MichaelaH last edited by

          @MichaelaH That's flows much better in my opinion 🙂 You may want to lose the line "Flip didn't wait etc" and maybe have something like:

          "Ohhh, ohhh do you know this one?" Flip asked "Why don't bears like fast food?"

          Berry started to think, but before he could answer-
          "Because they can't catch it!" Flip blurted out as he splashed around in a fit of giggles.

          That's only an idea anyway, I'm not the best at writing so it's totally what you're happy with and what you think flows well 🙂

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          • MichaelaH
            MichaelaH @Guest last edited by

            @hannahmccaffery Thank You, hope it is ok, I will use Your text, I like it a lot. Thank You for your help.

            fisch_und_baer.jpg

            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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            • ?
              A Former User last edited by

              Fab! Are you happy with it as that's the important thing? 🙂 I think the text gives Flip more of personality now and I would love to see more of these characters 😃

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              • MichaelaH
                MichaelaH @Guest last edited by

                @hannahmccaffery I am very happy with it, thank You so much. Yeah I am thinking about drawing one more picture to this story

                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                • MichaelaH
                  MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                  Working on July contest, have two thumbnails

                  Thumbnail A
                  Zeichnen_July vacation 0b.jpg

                  Thumbnail B
                  Zeichnen_July vacation 0a.jpg

                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                  • MichaelaH
                    MichaelaH last edited by

                    Now better sketch finished:
                    2019-07-18_232251.jpg

                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                    • MichaelaH
                      MichaelaH last edited by

                      Between work for fun - challange #aggressivesloth by @jimbobdrawingshow on instagram.
                      Hyrax taking its time eating leaves in the mean time sloth is going slowly in aggressive mode

                      aggressivesloth-process.jpg

                      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                      • MichaelaH
                        MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                        I am as @Aleksey patreon from mitchleeuwe and he gave me feedback to try my composition to show from lower angle. Here than two rough sketches in comparison.

                        Zeichnen_July vacation comparison.jpg

                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                          @MichaelaH oh yeah much better puts you right into the scene

                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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                          • MichaelaH
                            MichaelaH last edited by

                            Now gonna do some coloring

                            2019-07-26_211738.jpg

                            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                            • MichaelaH
                              MichaelaH last edited by

                              Changed the raccoon, taht he is also moving

                              2019-07-27_103730.jpg

                              https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                              https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                              • MichaelaH
                                MichaelaH last edited by

                                Next llustration finished, I put some more process here. I didn't do color study.

                                when-vacation-goes-wrong-process.jpg

                                https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                • BichonBistro
                                  BichonBistro @MichaelaH last edited by BichonBistro

                                  @MichaelaH P.S. Your signature is so perfect for the children’s book market 😊

                                  https://www.instagram.com/bichonbistro
                                  http://www.heartfeltimpressions.com
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                                  https://twitter.com/BichonBistro

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                                  • MichaelaH
                                    MichaelaH @BichonBistro last edited by

                                    @BichonBistro Thank You, I love mouse so 🙂 🐭

                                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                    • MichaelaH
                                      MichaelaH last edited by

                                      The publishers I am in contact with like my animals, but say I still have to work on human/kids, so last week and this week I did the daily exercise:

                                      daily20190803c.jpg

                                      daily20190809a.jpg

                                      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                      • MichaelaH
                                        MichaelaH last edited by

                                        daily20190817c (Individuell).jpg
                                        daily20190823big (Individuell).jpg
                                        daily20190830 (Individuell).jpg

                                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                        • BichonBistro
                                          BichonBistro @MichaelaH last edited by

                                          @MichaelaH I will always love your imaginative animals best but your humans are fabulous too!

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                                          https://twitter.com/BichonBistro

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                                          • MichaelaH
                                            MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                                            @BichonBistro Thank You so much for liking my work 🤗

                                            https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                            https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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