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    Piece for the Live Critique on Tuesday

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    • shinjifujioka
      shinjifujioka SVS OG @Lee Holland last edited by

      @Lee-Holland Thanks! Loved your otter pics.

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      • Dulcie
        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

        Really beautiful work, Shinji - I agree with all the other glowing comments 🙂 It will be interesting to see how they critique it tonight..I hope the video is available soon afterwards like with the 3rd Thursdays...I like that the red paint pot is the only bit of red, it focuses your eyes into that spot on the floor. I wonder if maybe the pictures at the top could tell more of the story...I can see flame and maybe flying in those shapes which fits with what you said.

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          shinjifujioka SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

          @Dulcie Thanks!

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          • shinjifujioka
            shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

            @Lee-White @Will-Terry Just wanted to say thanks again for the critique. I knew that the image could be pushed further, but I didn't realize how much more I could do. Definitely informative and I'd recommend anyone thinking of signing up to do so at the next opportunity. Also, will the recording be available to view? I wasn't able to watch the last two critiques and was hoping to be able to view those as well.

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            • Jonathon B
              Jonathon B @shinjifujioka last edited by

              @shinjifujioka Hey thanks for posting your progress pics. They're really helpful to see how you got your lighting figured out. This is still something I'm having a hard time with. Also seeing your piece in the critique last night was great. I learned so much from that one.

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              • shinjifujioka
                shinjifujioka SVS OG @Jonathon B last edited by

                @Jonathon-B Glad that it helps! I always like seeing how other artists get from point A to point B. I think much of what I learned came from observing how other artists work.

                And for lighting, I reference Pascal Campion's work quite a bit.

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                • Lee White
                  Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Great work Shinji! Here's the image from the crit if you want it...Shinji.jpg

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                  • shinjifujioka
                    shinjifujioka SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

                    @Lee-White Thanks! Gonna get started on tweaks today.

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                    • Dulcie
                      Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                      Looks fantastic! Glad it was helpful to you and everyone else. I didn't sign up this time because I needed more time to make a piece worth critiquing...but will definitely do it next time. I really hope there will be a recording to view...would have watched live but they take place at 4am my time, and I value my sleep 😞

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                      • joanie stone
                        joanie stone last edited by

                        I really love this piece and your drawing is spot on. Great work.

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                        • Charlie Eve Ryan
                          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          The paint on his outfit is a really nice touch!

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                          • shinjifujioka
                            shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                            Made tweaks based off of the feedback from the critique session. I think it feels noticeably more vibrant compared to pre-critique. @Lee-White, I think I'm probably too timid to push it as far as you did, but those suggestions you made really helped to breathe more life into the image. Thanks!

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                            • shinjifujioka
                              shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                              Oh shoot...forgot to fix his left leg...

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