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    Piece for the Live Critique on Tuesday

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    • shinjifujioka
      shinjifujioka SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

      @Dulcie Thanks!

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      • shinjifujioka
        shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

        @Lee-White @Will-Terry Just wanted to say thanks again for the critique. I knew that the image could be pushed further, but I didn't realize how much more I could do. Definitely informative and I'd recommend anyone thinking of signing up to do so at the next opportunity. Also, will the recording be available to view? I wasn't able to watch the last two critiques and was hoping to be able to view those as well.

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        • Jonathon B
          Jonathon B @shinjifujioka last edited by

          @shinjifujioka Hey thanks for posting your progress pics. They're really helpful to see how you got your lighting figured out. This is still something I'm having a hard time with. Also seeing your piece in the critique last night was great. I learned so much from that one.

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          • shinjifujioka
            shinjifujioka SVS OG @Jonathon B last edited by

            @Jonathon-B Glad that it helps! I always like seeing how other artists get from point A to point B. I think much of what I learned came from observing how other artists work.

            And for lighting, I reference Pascal Campion's work quite a bit.

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            • Lee White
              Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Great work Shinji! Here's the image from the crit if you want it...Shinji.jpg

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              • shinjifujioka
                shinjifujioka SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

                @Lee-White Thanks! Gonna get started on tweaks today.

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                • Dulcie
                  Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                  Looks fantastic! Glad it was helpful to you and everyone else. I didn't sign up this time because I needed more time to make a piece worth critiquing...but will definitely do it next time. I really hope there will be a recording to view...would have watched live but they take place at 4am my time, and I value my sleep 😞

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                  • joanie stone
                    joanie stone last edited by

                    I really love this piece and your drawing is spot on. Great work.

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                    • Charlie Eve Ryan
                      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      The paint on his outfit is a really nice touch!

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                      • shinjifujioka
                        shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                        Made tweaks based off of the feedback from the critique session. I think it feels noticeably more vibrant compared to pre-critique. @Lee-White, I think I'm probably too timid to push it as far as you did, but those suggestions you made really helped to breathe more life into the image. Thanks!

                        Dragon Fire 9 72dpi.jpg

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                        • shinjifujioka
                          shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

                          Oh shoot...forgot to fix his left leg...

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