Piece for the Live Critique on Tuesday
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@Lee-White @Will-Terry Just wanted to say thanks again for the critique. I knew that the image could be pushed further, but I didn't realize how much more I could do. Definitely informative and I'd recommend anyone thinking of signing up to do so at the next opportunity. Also, will the recording be available to view? I wasn't able to watch the last two critiques and was hoping to be able to view those as well.
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@shinjifujioka Hey thanks for posting your progress pics. They're really helpful to see how you got your lighting figured out. This is still something I'm having a hard time with. Also seeing your piece in the critique last night was great. I learned so much from that one.
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@Jonathon-B Glad that it helps! I always like seeing how other artists get from point A to point B. I think much of what I learned came from observing how other artists work.
And for lighting, I reference Pascal Campion's work quite a bit.
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Great work Shinji! Here's the image from the crit if you want it...
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@Lee-White Thanks! Gonna get started on tweaks today.
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Looks fantastic! Glad it was helpful to you and everyone else. I didn't sign up this time because I needed more time to make a piece worth critiquing...but will definitely do it next time. I really hope there will be a recording to view...would have watched live but they take place at 4am my time, and I value my sleep
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I really love this piece and your drawing is spot on. Great work.
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The paint on his outfit is a really nice touch!
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Made tweaks based off of the feedback from the critique session. I think it feels noticeably more vibrant compared to pre-critique. @Lee-White, I think I'm probably too timid to push it as far as you did, but those suggestions you made really helped to breathe more life into the image. Thanks!
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Oh shoot...forgot to fix his left leg...
