Acorn Defender WIP

StudioLooong

thanks @bathyscaph @Coreyartus I moved some things around and made the squirrel a little bigger. It is supposed to read as a normal sized squirrel that is very close to the camera. You can use the acorns as a refrence point - the tiny ones in the tree in the bg are the same size as the one the squirrel has. Do you think this is working better?

Coreyartus

Much much better (at least to my eye)! I think your intent is a lot clearer now. Upon seeing it this way, one other thing I might suggest is to darken ever so slightly the squirrel and lighten the trees in the far distance. Dark things pop forward in images, and light things recede. Even if you made the darks of the tree & boy and his fence just a bit lighter, and then the trees in the far distance even lighter, it might give some more depth to your image and make the squirrel seem closer.

Will Terry has some examples on his website: https://www.willterry.com/

Atmospheric examples.jpg

You can clearly see the depth of the image he's created because he's got dark foregrounds in all three of them, and the middleground and background are progressively lighter. Your primary emphasis, as it looks right now, is also in the middle ground (the boy and his tree). The surprised look on the squirrels face stands out because of the contrast of the light eyes against his dark face. We'll still get that if you make him a smidge darker, or perhaps added another deeper brown tone to his shading.

Anyway, you get the point. That's just what I see with my eye--you may want to approach it differently. In my opinion it's still so much clearer than what you had earlier--kudos to making those adjustments the way you did. It's looking good!!

StudioLooong

@Coreyartus oh yeah, totally plan to do that, I still have a bit of work to do with the colors/lighting.

StudioLooong

finally got all the line work fixed up - now on to rendering and light

Aaron_T

@StudioLooong This much more clearly shows the squirrel is in the foreground...nice update. What a fun concept.

chrisaakins

@StudioLooong I think you definitely need some more atmospheric perspective. If you greyed out the tree and the girl just a bit more there would be no forced perspective. Also, even though the squirrel is close there would be brighter highlights on it. It's the contrast of the up close object and the lack of contrast in the background which gives the illusion of space and depth.

StudioLooong

@chrisaakins thanks, I'm still working on the rendering and lighting I hadn't gotten to the squirrel or the bg yet.

chrisaakins

@StudioLooong Well get on it, then! haha. We are all waiting to see your good work!

StudioLooong

Calling this one done! I'm not sure if I am completely satisfied with the color on the squirrel's face yet - I might go back in in a day or two and give it another try if it's still bothering me.

Amanda Jean

The chalk on the tree and the tree's trunk are perfect! I just love everything about this.

Neha Rawat

@StudioLooong hey this looks great! The concept is much clearer than the initial version. Also love the expressions! I do have 2 suggestions which you can try:

As suggested by coreyartus earlier, try desaturating the foreground elements (the squirrel and the bush), maybe to a similar shade.
I understand you’ve repositioned the squirrel to the bottom left corner to get the perspective, but the crop looks a little tight. Maybe if you have time you can draw the full squirrel, and show that it’s sitting on a tree branch. So it,l be a close up of the tree bark and branch which will be bordering the left side. Makes sense?

StudioLooong

I couldn't leave it alone - I went back in and made the squirrel a bit smaller and mocked in some text so that it can show as a two page spread.

TessaW

It's gorgeous! I love it.

MichaelaH

@StudioLooong It is wonderful and funny, I love how you made the "arghhh" really big

Coreyartus

OH, this turned out lovely!!! Well done!!! Congrats!!

Chip Valecek

@StudioLooong this is a really great piece. I love it.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@StudioLooong this is looking really great