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    Decorative Pirate Cabin COMPLETED! Yay!

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    • Perrij
      Perrij last edited by

      at that point where i don't know if i like it anymore LOL ughhhhh help WIP.png

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @Perrij last edited by Heather Boyd

        @Perrij

        Not to nit pick but where the blue handle of the jar meets the table cloth bothers me as a tangent.

        I’d say push through and try to remember what sparked your interest and try to rekindle that feeling or whatever so it will help you finish. Nothing like not finishing to deter you from going into a new work and not having enough momentum to finish it.

        🙂

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        • Perrij
          Perrij last edited by

          @Heather-Boyd ooh crimeny you're right heather, that's an awful tangent. Not nitpicky at all, I appreciate it. I'll have to take care of that soon... But I did a little more work. Rofl I think Im updating this thread too often, oh well! It helps me push forward
          WIP.png

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            Amanda Jean @Perrij last edited by

            @Perrij said in Decorative Pirate Cabin WIP:

            I think Im updating this thread too often, oh well! It helps me push forward

            You are so not. Love seeing your progress!
            I agree about the tangent, but other than that, outstanding work!

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            • MichaelaH
              MichaelaH @Perrij last edited by

              @Perrij I also love to see the process, it is great illustration

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              • Perrij
                Perrij last edited by

                @Amanda-Jean and @MichaelaH oh thank you so much both of you, so kind of you to stop in here and give me some encouragement. Sometimes you feel like you're trying to make it all on your own, so it means a lot to have you along for the ride

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                • Perrij
                  Perrij last edited by

                  So close to being DONE! I just need to figure out what pattern I want on the captain's big robe. Hm! He's supposed to have made his coat out of a tapestry...Still deciding how to balance that much detail....Welp, maybe I'll finish it tonight...WIP.png

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                  • BichonBistro
                    BichonBistro @Perrij last edited by

                    @Perrij I like your composition and colors very much—is it possible to bring the wall tapestry in front of the rod at the corners without too much reworking? Right now it looks to me a bit like the rod is going through the head of the figure in the foreground.

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                    • MichaelaH
                      MichaelaH last edited by

                      Looking fully amazing, love it, like @BichonBistro wrote, I would also put the tapestry in front.

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                        Amanda Jean last edited by

                        This is looking straight up amazeballs!! Love it.

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                        • Su
                          Su last edited by

                          Your artwork is fantastic!! Way to stick with it—it's exceptional!

                          Kudos to you!

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                          • Coreyartus
                            Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                            Wow! This is really shaping up!!! Nicely done!!

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                            • TwiggyT
                              TwiggyT last edited by

                              I really like the bored pirate's expression, and for some reason I keep going back to those subtle hints of pinks and blues in the wall. Lovely!

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                              • Perrij
                                Perrij last edited by

                                Thank you!! Thank you so much everyone!! I can finally say it's done, and on to the next one! @BichonBistro and @MichaelaH I appreciated the feedback and changed the tapestry. I didn't want to fold the curtain over the rod COMPLETELY because it created too many blocky square shapes. So hopefully came to a good compromise. Thanks for pointing that out. illius_room_small.png

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                                • BichonBistro
                                  BichonBistro @Perrij last edited by

                                  @Perrij Yes, that is what I had in mind--puts the tapestry clearly in the background 🙂

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                                  • BichonBistro
                                    BichonBistro @TwiggyT last edited by

                                    @TwiggyT I agree, such lovely coloring!

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                                    • Perrij
                                      Perrij last edited by

                                      Thank you @BichonBistro I kind of think that the colors are a bit muddy but, eh! Progress is progress

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                                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Perrij last edited by

                                        @Perrij lovely!

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                                        • Zachary Drenski
                                          Zachary Drenski last edited by

                                          This looks great. I love all the little details. I can't wait to see what you do next!

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                                          • TessaW
                                            TessaW last edited by

                                            I've loved watching this come together. I really like how you stylize your characters, and your "hand acting" is on point. A job well done! Congrats!

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