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    • artbytra
      artbytra SVS OG last edited by

      Took advantage of the MDT zone this month! Great work all around again. Here’s mine. I had fun with this one. -Todd 729E24F3-F966-40EA-ADC7-83EE30630B3F.jpeg

      https://www.instagram.com/art.by.tra/

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      • Coley
        Coley last edited by Coley

        a rusty tuba ! (unknowingly a mouse house lol) I don;tknow what I was thinking, but I got something done lol
        it's supposed to be the reflections of the kids in the tuba, not sure if that comes across or not.
        schoolfinal.jpg

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • chrisaakins
          chrisaakins @Coley last edited by

          @Coley I love this! Very well done!

          Chris Akins
          www.chrisakinsart.com
          www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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          • zacharygephardt
            zacharygephardt @danielerossi last edited by

            @danielerossi Thank you! I was really trying to sell the weight of the tree. I'm glad it came through.

            Zachary Gephardt
            Instagram.com/zachary.gephardt/

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            • zacharygephardt
              zacharygephardt @Coley last edited by

              @Coley That reflection looks really awesome! Great Work!

              Zachary Gephardt
              Instagram.com/zachary.gephardt/

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              • lmrush
                lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Put my son to bed and fell asleep/forgot to submit, I realize I missed it but wanted to share here anyway-great entries everyone πŸ™‚alligp copy.jpg

                Lisa Rush
                www.lisarushgallery.com
                www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                • Coley
                  Coley @chrisaakins last edited by

                  @chrisaakins thank you πŸ™‚

                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                  • Coley
                    Coley @zacharygephardt last edited by

                    @zacharygephardt thanks πŸ™‚

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • danielerossi
                      danielerossi @zacharygephardt last edited by

                      @zacharygephardt Your drawing recalled a flashback from elementary school. We were instructed to bring leaves to class and I actually brought branches!

                      https://www.instagram.com/heyfrankybanky

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @SFischer last edited by

                        @SFischer I'm not sure about what it takes to make it portfolio ready but I do which there were areas of more clarity -without the light difference the touch of your brush is all the same. so more definition in areas would help in my opinion. πŸ™‚ I like it.

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                        Be blessed,

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                        • Kasey Snow
                          Kasey Snow @SFischer last edited by

                          @SFischer Love the concept, perspective, and color palette! I do agree with Heather though, I think choosing to tighten up some edges of characters either in the foreground or background would help.

                          Personally, I think tightening the background figures/ground/sky to be more crisp and leaving the foreground figures out of focus and blurry like they are now would really pull it all together and direct the eye to the kid on the dino. Right now I'm drawn to those kids silhouetted in the front row first, and the dinosaur read as a tree initially until I looked closer.

                          http://kaseysnow.com ~ https://instagram.com/KaseySnowArt/ ~ https://twitter.com/KaseySnowArt ~ https://www.patreon.com/KaseySnow ~

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                          ~Kasey

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                          • Shara Mills
                            Shara Mills last edited by

                            So... how do we attend the critique and winner reveal live?

                            facebook.com/SharaMasulonisMillsIllustration/

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                            • Chip Valecek
                              Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Shara Mills last edited by

                              @Shara-Mills you will get an email the week of with a link to a ZOOM webinar.


                              https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
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                              http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                              • SFischer
                                SFischer last edited by

                                @Heather-Boyd @Kasey-Snow Thank you for the feedback! I certainly can see the clarity issue now.

                                @Kasey-Snow I think tightening up will certainly help solve the clarity issue. Thank you for the feedback!

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                                • Sathya Illu
                                  Sathya Illu @Kerisa last edited by

                                  @Kerisa Thank you so much Kerisa! ❀ I love your dino, it's so cutee πŸ™‚

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                                  • zacharygephardt
                                    zacharygephardt @danielerossi last edited by

                                    @danielerossi lol Nice! The concept was actually my wife's idea. Maybe she did the same thing...

                                    Zachary Gephardt
                                    Instagram.com/zachary.gephardt/

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                                    • Shara Mills
                                      Shara Mills last edited by

                                      Just caught the end of the critique live. When will the video be added to the critique arena course?

                                      facebook.com/SharaMasulonisMillsIllustration/

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                                      • LisaF
                                        LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Shara Mills last edited by

                                        @Shara-Mills Next week:smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

                                        Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                                        lisa@svslearn.com

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                                        • MissMushy
                                          MissMushy SVS OG last edited by

                                          Congrats to the contest winners! Well deserved.
                                          I am a bit torn about the new format of the critique arena though. While I appreciate having positive elements of each image highlighted, I feel I learn so much more from discussions or draw overs on how images can be improved. just my 2 cents...

                                          www.instagram.com/artbymmartinez
                                          www.instagram.com/the.mindful.otter

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                                          • xin li
                                            xin li last edited by

                                            I just started watching the critique video right now. Looks like I missed out a very fun live critique party :-). contrats to the contest winners.

                                            Web: www.lixin.no
                                            IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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