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    • Coley
      Coley last edited by Coley

      a rusty tuba ! (unknowingly a mouse house lol) I don;tknow what I was thinking, but I got something done lol
      it's supposed to be the reflections of the kids in the tuba, not sure if that comes across or not.
      schoolfinal.jpg

      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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      • chrisaakins
        chrisaakins @Coley last edited by

        @Coley I love this! Very well done!

        Chris Akins
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        • zacharygephardt
          zacharygephardt @danielerossi last edited by

          @danielerossi Thank you! I was really trying to sell the weight of the tree. I'm glad it came through.

          Zachary Gephardt
          Instagram.com/zachary.gephardt/

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          • zacharygephardt
            zacharygephardt @Coley last edited by

            @Coley That reflection looks really awesome! Great Work!

            Zachary Gephardt
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            • lmrush
              lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Put my son to bed and fell asleep/forgot to submit, I realize I missed it but wanted to share here anyway-great entries everyone 🙂alligp copy.jpg

              Lisa Rush
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              • Coley
                Coley @chrisaakins last edited by

                @chrisaakins thank you 🙂

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • Coley
                  Coley @zacharygephardt last edited by

                  @zacharygephardt thanks 🙂

                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                  • danielerossi
                    danielerossi @zacharygephardt last edited by

                    @zacharygephardt Your drawing recalled a flashback from elementary school. We were instructed to bring leaves to class and I actually brought branches!

                    https://www.instagram.com/heyfrankybanky

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                    • Heather Boyd
                      Heather Boyd @SFischer last edited by

                      @SFischer I'm not sure about what it takes to make it portfolio ready but I do which there were areas of more clarity -without the light difference the touch of your brush is all the same. so more definition in areas would help in my opinion. 🙂 I like it.

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                      • Kasey Snow
                        Kasey Snow @SFischer last edited by

                        @SFischer Love the concept, perspective, and color palette! I do agree with Heather though, I think choosing to tighten up some edges of characters either in the foreground or background would help.

                        Personally, I think tightening the background figures/ground/sky to be more crisp and leaving the foreground figures out of focus and blurry like they are now would really pull it all together and direct the eye to the kid on the dino. Right now I'm drawn to those kids silhouetted in the front row first, and the dinosaur read as a tree initially until I looked closer.

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                        • Shara Mills
                          Shara Mills last edited by

                          So... how do we attend the critique and winner reveal live?

                          facebook.com/SharaMasulonisMillsIllustration/

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                          • Chip Valecek
                            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Shara Mills last edited by

                            @Shara-Mills you will get an email the week of with a link to a ZOOM webinar.


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                            • SFischer
                              SFischer last edited by

                              @Heather-Boyd @Kasey-Snow Thank you for the feedback! I certainly can see the clarity issue now.

                              @Kasey-Snow I think tightening up will certainly help solve the clarity issue. Thank you for the feedback!

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                              • Sathya Illu
                                Sathya Illu @Kerisa last edited by

                                @Kerisa Thank you so much Kerisa! ❤ I love your dino, it's so cutee 🙂

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                                • zacharygephardt
                                  zacharygephardt @danielerossi last edited by

                                  @danielerossi lol Nice! The concept was actually my wife's idea. Maybe she did the same thing...

                                  Zachary Gephardt
                                  Instagram.com/zachary.gephardt/

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                                  • Shara Mills
                                    Shara Mills last edited by

                                    Just caught the end of the critique live. When will the video be added to the critique arena course?

                                    facebook.com/SharaMasulonisMillsIllustration/

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                                    • LisaF
                                      LisaF SVS Team SVS OG @Shara Mills last edited by

                                      @Shara-Mills Next week:smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

                                      Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
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                                      • MissMushy
                                        MissMushy SVS OG last edited by

                                        Congrats to the contest winners! Well deserved.
                                        I am a bit torn about the new format of the critique arena though. While I appreciate having positive elements of each image highlighted, I feel I learn so much more from discussions or draw overs on how images can be improved. just my 2 cents...

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                                        • xin li
                                          xin li last edited by

                                          I just started watching the critique video right now. Looks like I missed out a very fun live critique party :-). contrats to the contest winners.

                                          Web: www.lixin.no
                                          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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