October WIP help requested...

chrisaakins

So I think I am done. I used ball point pen and then edited it a little. I really like how it turned out. If you see any major glaring things let me know. If not I think I will submit it tomorrow.
Penny and Puupy Prompt small.jpg

theprairiefox

@chrisaakins The tag looks better. The ballpoint gives it a very nice texture.

I really like the Fluffy breaking the frame it makes the dog seem really big. I wonder if you had the smoke NOT break the frame if it would look even better. You could try it digitally pretty easy.

Nicely done.

Chip Valecek

@chrisaakins I love the expression on the girls face! She seems so happy. Love the snot drip LOL

I agree with @theprairiefox with the smoke, or break it even more. It almost creates a tangent on the left. The other thing you can try is to darken the background a little more, your characters would pop even more. Great work!

chrisaakins

Thanks @Chip-Valecek and @theprairiefox I took your advice and touched it up a little bit with PS to fix the compositional problems. I am gogin to go ahead and post it. Not sure if it is sweet 16 quality but it is by far one of my better works to date.

J L Martin

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chrisaakins

@J-L-Martin Thanks. I really love breaking the frame.

theprairiefox

@chrisaakins I like the changes... well done.

MOO

@chrisaakins Nice work. I love seeing the transformation from rough to finished.

MOO

@chrisaakins I also like the snot

Zachary Drenski

@chrisaakins this looks awesome!

Coley

This is really amazing!!!the little girl is so cute and happy and the dog so beat up lol. Really love the breaking the frame thing. Wonderful job!

NicolaSchofield

@chrisaakins the textures and shading you've created with the ball point pen are great. How big is the original?

chrisaakins

@neschof Thank you so much! 8x10