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    December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :)

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    • cortney mahone
      cortney mahone @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett this is so cool, I love the description In the upper right image lol, canโ€™t wait to see it finished

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        Sketch! Down to the wire. Got a day and a half. But at least the hard parts are all figured out ๐Ÿ™‚

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        • braden H
          braden H last edited by

          Lines!

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

            @Braden-Hallett oh no! I thought you were already done. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ Go Braden!

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              knocking it out of the park AGAIN Mr. @Braden-Hallett !!! so fun. in a very evil sort of way ha ha!!!

              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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              • braden H
                braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                @Nyrryl-Cadiz said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated ๐Ÿ™‚:

                oh no! I thought you were already done.

                Oh goodness no ๐Ÿ™‚ Why take your time and not be stressed when you can wait until the very last two days?

                @Coley said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated ๐Ÿ™‚:

                knocking it out of the park AGAIN

                Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                • braden H
                  braden H last edited by

                  Everything's laid in. Time for some adjustment layers and the inclusion of hatching and other nice mark making ๐Ÿ™‚

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                  • Gustavo Ruiz
                    Gustavo Ruiz @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett this made me chuckle! Very nice concept and execution! ๐Ÿ‘

                    Gustavo Ruiz
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                    • Oriana Fernandez
                      Oriana Fernandez @braden H last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett this so reminds me of the Tom and Jerry cartoon, Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Mouse (1947), only in this case, the mice are in charge of the poisonous concoction, and not the cat! Hehe! I like how you've handled the two planes, above and below, and even the contrast between the two. As always, your character expressions are priceless! Great composition!

                      https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Oriana Fernandez last edited by

                        @Oriana-Fernandez @Gustavo-Ruiz Thanks guys ๐Ÿ™‚ I've gotta track down that Tom and Jerry cartoon!

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Gonna put it away until tonight and then maybe make a few small tweaks. It's at the point where adding too much will ruin it. But I'm liking it as it is ๐Ÿ™‚

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                          • demotlj
                            demotlj SVS OG @braden H last edited by demotlj

                            @Braden-Hallett Great as always. I particularly like the repetition of the rats' color in the person's face. It helps tie the two halves together. I don't know why you always say that you have difficulty with color because I think you do a great job with it!

                            Laurie DeMott
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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Thanks for the feedback everyone ๐Ÿ™‚

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @demotlj last edited by

                                @demotlj said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated ๐Ÿ™‚:

                                I don't know why you always say that you have difficulty with color because I think you do a great job with it!

                                It's still a roll of the dice or the flip of a coin whether my colours will work out or not. I need better odds than that ๐Ÿ™‚

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