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    • Coley
      Coley last edited by

      The boy is looking pretty great! Love the shadows on his coat. I love the broken ornament book and I also bought it last year! The reindeer in it are awesome too!

      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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      • KaraDaniel
        KaraDaniel @Coley last edited by

        @Coley yes, the reindeer are superb!

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          KaraDaniel last edited by

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          • KaraDaniel
            KaraDaniel last edited by

            Feedback welcome. I feel like I'm getting close to a finished piece, maybe another couple hours of shading, line work, etc.

            Specifically, I was interested in your thoughts on:
            -The way I cropped it. I have about 1/2" more of the image on the left and right side. I want the boy to feel sort of cramped hiding behind the tree so I got it pretty close but I can come in closer too.

            • The snow...i'm not super pleased but I don't really know how to make it better without possibly making it worse lol.
            • My shadows...are they making enough sense? My intention is fro the sun to be coming from the mid-left

            And also anything else you see that needs extra attention, I would greatly appreciate 🙂

            (FYI this is a pic with my camera phone so it's got some weird shadow on the top and the color is a bit dull compared to the original. I'll scan the final.)

            IMG_20200109_135425081.jpg

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            • KaraDaniel
              KaraDaniel last edited by

              Ugh and it's horribly blurry too unless you click on it and blow it up big... I think my camera files are super large...

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              • NicolaSchofield
                NicolaSchofield @KaraDaniel last edited by

                @KaraDaniel This is so great, I'm loving how close we are to the boy's face and his expression is wonderful. You've put us right there with him! The footprints feel a little lost at the mo but I guess they'll be getting some more shading in the final work you're planning.

                Nicola Schofield

                Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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                • Kali
                  Kali @KaraDaniel last edited by

                  @KaraDaniel Usually posting large files on forums will automatically resize the image nowadays. I don't think it is horribly blurry, but I know how you feel when you post something and it looks different from how you're used to seeing it! 🙂

                  I think your piece is turning out wonderful so far. I really love the way you painted the footprints. I'm enjoying seeing the process!

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                  • KaraDaniel
                    KaraDaniel @Kali last edited by

                    @Kalimostlypaints @neschof thank you!

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                    • KaraDaniel
                      KaraDaniel last edited by

                      So I'm pretty close to finish, yay!

                      Wondering what looks best...falling snow, no snow, or redo the snow flakes in a better way (like is it too much, too opaque, etc)

                      Thanks to everyone who has given me feedback thus far, I appreciate it!

                      januaryprompt copy.jpg

                      januarypromptwithsnow copy.jpg

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                      • deborah Haagenson
                        deborah Haagenson @KaraDaniel last edited by

                        @KaraDaniel This one with the falling snow looks great! It's fun to see the progression of your piece. This looks finished to me!

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