January WIP from thumbnails to color study (critique requested)
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@LauraA Beautiful drawing - everything reads well and the story comes through - i love the texture too (it looks like lithography crayon to me) Very nice!
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@LauraA I think this is great! I feel light and happy looking at the foxes dancing. I find it interesting how our minds go in such different directions when coming up with an idea. I'm wondering if those are other foxes in the trees? I'm not sure why?
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@Kevin-Longueil Yay! I have been trying to get a lithography effect for ages! Today it came almost accidentally while I was messing with color overlays. I almost don't want to do much more, but the drawing at least needs to be clear.
@deborah-Haagenson I'm glad the foxes look whimisical, because that's what I was going for--the serendipity of happening upon something that sort of belongs to its own world. And yes, those are other foxes, hiding from the hunting hound! The idea is that the others have seen him but this one couple is so into their dance that they haven't noticed him yet. Also, the couple running behind the trees should look like they're on all fours. I like the idea that yes, they're dancing foxes, but when people see them, they change back into regular foxes! Or maybe they're half civilized, half wild. And that's why I need to define the drawing more. I know it's hard to tell from what I've got down right now.
Thank you!
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@LauraA I agree with everyone, great texture, whimsical foxes, my one thing is the tail sticking out of the bottom right hand corner. It's very distracting and keeps grabbing my attention. Also love the colors
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Beautiful! I love the texture and movement. I agree about the tail in the bottom right...that bottom corner could make a great spot for the text? Looks great so far though!
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@Meg-Clayburn-0 @KaraDaniel Hmm, now that I think of it, you're right about the tail. I did it to establish the space and that there were other couples dancing, but it's an awful lot of contrast. I'll look at other solutions. Thanks, just what I needed to see with a fresh eye!
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I took your suggestion, @KaraDaniel, and added some text. I also refined the background characters a little and moved a tree to work on the spatial effect some more before getting into the final version.
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- Are there too many brown spots/characters in the background? See version below with fewer foxes. Thoughts?
Thank you!
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I think I like it better with more brown spots/foxes, I feel like when there are singular spots of brown my eye stops on them more rather than feeling like it keeps my eye moving with more brown spots? If that makes sense?
It's really nice, sweet concept and the tracks swirling around really help the swoopy feeling
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I love the movement and the light in this image, and the expression on the dog's face. I want to know more about the other figures behind the trees.
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I think removing the bottom right tail left a nice space for the text. I like both images you have shared! My only critique would be that the foxes and the dog look like the same brownish color on my screen so at first it wasn't super clear to me that Will was a dog. But I love the texture of whatever brush you're using. It's looking really wonderful.
