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    • Amelia Bothe
      Amelia Bothe last edited by

      Hello all! I have just finished up an entry for this contest: https://www.gallerycollection.com/greeting-cards-scholarship.htm
      The winner receives $10,000 so i am feeling the pressure haha. Here is what I came up with:
      greetingcardSMALL.jpg
      Definitely need some guidance! The past winning entries look nothing like this (you can see them on the scholarship site) so I am feeling a bit unsure about submitting this! Any feedback and thoughts would be appreciated!!!

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      • NicolaSchofield
        NicolaSchofield @Amelia Bothe last edited by

        @Amelia-Bothe the link didn't work for me, it said page not found, so I couldn't see the other entries or details, but this is amazing! Is it based on a prompt? What are the competition rules?

        Nicola Schofield

        Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
        Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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        • Amelia Bothe
          Amelia Bothe last edited by

          oh no! I think if you google "american greeting card scholarship" it should come up. not sure why the link doesnt work! And thank you 🙂 nope no prompt! just has to be greeting-card-y haha

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          • deborah Haagenson
            deborah Haagenson last edited by

            This is beautifuly done and so cute!! I wish you good luck!!

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            • sarahlash
              sarahlash @Amelia Bothe last edited by

              @Amelia-Bothe This is so amazing! I want to snuggle those little critters.

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              • carlianne
                carlianne @Amelia Bothe last edited by

                @Amelia-Bothe I think it is a really fun and but image! Really beautifully rendered.

                The one thing I would try is to make the background a bit more cool in color so that your characters which are very warm can pop out more.

                But it is lovely! ❤️

                Check out my art and tutorials :)

                Instagram: www.instagram.com/carliannecreates/

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                • KaraDaniel
                  KaraDaniel last edited by

                  I looked at the previous winners and I think you could definitely win with this piece! So adorable. I'd buy that card!

                  instagram.com/sha_kara
                  karadaniel.net

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                  • cristen
                    cristen @Amelia Bothe last edited by

                    @Amelia-Bothe looks great! I hope you win the scholarship!

                    C-Barnard

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                    • eriberart
                      eriberart last edited by

                      Amazing work! I definitely think your work is on par with (if not better) than previous winners. My only thought is I’m not sure what the occasion would be for the card? (Though this is coming from a person who never buys cards so sorry if it is obvious to others 😂)

                      Instagram and Twitter: @eriberart
                      Website: www.erinmcclean.com

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                      • demotlj
                        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                        I think it’s beautiful and my only suggestion is as @carlianne said, the background detracts from the characters some. You could just eliminate the background because lots of greeting cards are characters on a white or plain background. Good luck - if you don’t win, you should sell it yourself.

                        Laurie DeMott
                        instagram.com/demotlj

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                        • Coley
                          Coley last edited by

                          This is seriously amazing! I love it!

                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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