March WIP: Everything’s broken - halp! 😂

[EliaMurrayArt]

What would you change, add, darken, lighten?

As I am finishing this up, I would love some extra eyes to point out the weakest parts and make suggestions on how I can improve.

Thank you! ️

[Griffin McPherson]

@EliaMurrayArt I would also go with option A, the creature being darker works a bit better I think

[Griffin McPherson]

@EliaMurrayArt I would just try darkening the right wall a bit to see how that looks, that could give the image a bit more depth. I know the bookshelf is broken but the perspective of it is distracting got me because it isn’t quite lining up with the plane of the wall. The way I would go about adjusting it is sketching in the bookshelf unbroken so you can see how it would look in proper perspective and then break it and adjust from there. Hope this helps!

[EliaMurrayArt]

@Griff said in March WIP: Everything’s broken - halp! :

@EliaMurrayArt I would also go with option A, the creature being darker works a bit better I think

What does your eye go to first? Here’s a darker creature. But I’m wondering if he’s too saturated now? I want the man to be the first look.

[Griffin McPherson]

@EliaMurrayArt I don’t mind the saturation but I do think the creature is too dark around the man and it makes it harder to see him

[EliaMurrayArt]

@Griff hmmmm agreed! I’ll work on that!

[chrisaakins]

@EliaMurrayArt I think if you saturate the man it will help. I also think that you need to add some shadows to the broken wall angles where you can see the cross sections. I really am liking this. Your gesture and expression is wonderful. I think if you had a couple of chunks of ceiling falling down and some dust clouds it will help with the "the monster just ripped off the ceiling" vibe.

[EliaMurrayArt]

@chrisaakins dust clouds, yes, I love it! I thought it felt too still and what you’re suggesting is spot on. Yes. I have tried adding shadows to the walls but it always felt weird. I’ll give it some more goes. Thank you!!

[EliaMurrayArt]

Does this look like rubble dust clouds..... ? Is this working?

[carlianne]

@EliaMurrayArt oh yeah the dust helps a lot!

[EliaMurrayArt]

@carlianne thank you!

[chrisaakins]

@EliaMurrayArt looks good!

[EliaMurrayArt]

@chrisaakins Thank you!! I am so glad you suggested it!