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    April contest WIP, feedback always appreciated :)

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      OKAY.

      Last month stuff went to hell, maybe this month I can spread the work out and not scramble to get something in a couple hours before the deadline (unprofessional conduct, sir!)

      So I tried to figure out kind of how a robot can malfunction, go wrong, etc. Going berserk, exploding and stuff seemed easy, so I decided to have a puggle robot suddenyl 'lay' eggs (gonna try and get that perfect squatty poop pose)

      So here's some character exploration and colour study ๐Ÿ™‚

      Feedback, as always, is appreciated. Feedback makes is all stronger. Super strong. Super DUPER strong. ULTIMATE COSMIC POW- ahem pardon me...

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      • phoenix yip
        phoenix yip last edited by

        I love these character designs! The line character and weight are really good! Canโ€™t wait to see the end product!

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        • Coley
          Coley last edited by

          Awesome characters and idea ๐Ÿ’ก

          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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          • marine
            marine last edited by

            Just reading your concept made me laugh!! ๐Ÿ™‚
            Through its robot traits the pug is really cute!

            https://marine-coutroutsios.com
            https://www.instagram.com/marinecoutroutsios/

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            • Megan van der Berg
              Megan van der Berg last edited by

              Waaaaaaaahahahahahaha .... thats hilarious. Love it!

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                Thanks everyone ๐Ÿ™‚

                Work progresses!

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                • JoshSchouwstra
                  JoshSchouwstra last edited by

                  Ok, first off, I LOVE your style, and the concept for this picture!

                  Only critiques I can think to give would be to consider framing the image a bit differently (see picture below). By adding that little bit more space above the dog, it puts both the girl and the dog in a nice top third-bordering-on-center area of the image, which I find to be more pleasing.
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                  And to slightly shorten the strap on the girl's goggles. Even though they are supposed to be flying off, they look a slight bit too loose in my opinion to have been on properly.

                  Again, love this piece and look forward to seeing the finished product!

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                  • MattBaker
                    MattBaker last edited by

                    Pure gravy so far, dude ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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