Effective Vehicle Design - Feedback
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That's a great design! Love the texture and colors too. The only thing that I notice is the white edge on the right side of the passenger window makes it look like there's a highlight there. It's draws your eye to the shadow at the top which suggests that we're looking through the side window at the inside top of the windshield, but that line would be sloping down and to the left, towards the same vanishing point as the top rear of the briefcasemobile. That might be alleviated by filling in that lighter gap, or bringing the rightmost edge of the windshield up slightly. I'm just being nitpicky though, of course.
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Nice work! Indeed it´s my next approach in vehicle design to develop some fun stuff inspired by Shane Hunt Are you using vector software to render this?.
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@Guy-McAlister oh, this is such a cool design!
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First word that sprang to mind was comfy. What a comfy ride that be. I think it’s adorable and the texture drives home suitcase material.
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Adorable and charming! My nephew would love to have a suitcase just like this. Great job!
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@Aaron_T Thank you for the feedback.
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@Alvaro-Morales I sketched this design out, took a picture with my iPad Pro, and fleshed it out in Procreate. Can't say enough how much I love using that program on the iPad! Thank you for your comments!
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@Dima-Eichhorn Thank you Dima!
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@Heather-Boyd Thank you Heather! It sure was fun to carry through from sketch to finished piece.
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@Miranda-Hoover Thank you Miranda!
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@Guy-McAlister Hi, Guy. Yeap, It seems Procreacte is turning in a sort of standard tool, such as PS did in the past. Indeed, Adobe launched Fesco, as a direct competitor for Procreate but it seems Procreate is a strong, robust tool. I use Autodesk Sketchbook, and just turning in PS, which is a powerful tool, but still, is a bit rigid for me, it will take time get accustomed I guess. Always great to share these topics, mate! Take care!.
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@Guy-McAlister Thats cool.
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Beautiful work! This works on many levels, the proportions, the style, the color choice and contrast. Very appealing design, well done
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@natiwata Thank you for the kind remarks.
