Any critiques?

jmoglesby

Hey guys!! So I just finished a concept art piece and was wondering if you guys could offer any critique or advice to improve it ! Thanks!!

https://www.instagram.com/p/CB0-J5shV04/?igshid=qlezjfbyazvu

Jeremy Ross

Hi @jmoglesby, can you post the image here? If it’s on instagram, presume you are already satisfied with it?

jmoglesby

@Jeremy-Ross I tried to buy it seemed like you could only attach files with links by using this “![alt text](image url)“

jmoglesby

@gavpartridge That looks awesome!! Thank you!! I will study and apply all of that the next go round! My biggest issue was a general sense of the piece lacking depth (not spatial depth), and that helps a lot. The roofs as more than just planes is normally something I think about but I guess it just slipped this time... Thanks for everything!!

Jeremy Ross

Hi @jmoglesby, no worries. In addition to the points by @gavpartridge, I would also consider changing your line thickness of foreground and background to add depth. For example, the outlined mountains have same thickness as buildings. You might also move your characters to the left to avoid placing them smack in the middle. It’s a nice composition.

jmoglesby

@Jeremy-Ross Thanks! I may do a version two of this one and if I do I’ll share it with y’all.