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    • TamaraDomuzin
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      • Naroth Kean
        Naroth Kean last edited by

        very cute! and I like your color as well.

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        • Lydia M
          Lydia M last edited by

          It's so cute and that squirrel's face is hilarious. I like the colors too. The only part that bothered my eye was the table. It seems to be slicing into the necks of the two smaller characters. If you reduce the size of the table it might help. Capturesquirrel.JPG

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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

            Very cute! The only thing that I would do is maybe make the cake bigger or and a candle to it. I really didn't notice the cake till I looked harder.


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