DECEMBER CONTEST: YETI - first sketches - feedback please
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@doro_thea without the necklace is better. I'm back and forth on the wording and really like the panel idea! It looks so clean!
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@doro_thea back to the paneling, I would try not to cut off any part of the character or put it to close to the edge of it creates a tablet and that's where my eye goes. Specifically in the 2nd one, it's barely cuts part of the crutch off and it's kinda distracting, and in the 4th one ours super close to the edge on the right side.
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@Meg-Clayburn thanks, that is great feedback. I will try to fix it... Is it the letting I used that leaves you unsure, or the wording it self?
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@doro_thea I really like the way you incorporated all five poses into one piece with an organic approach that makes it look like one image instead of a handful of images slapped on a sheet (like I did lol). Your rendered yetis look so good too! Nice work:)
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@doro_thea I think it's the lettering. I feel it's kind of distracting.
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@DaveLeekArt Thank you! yours is stunning though, I love how much character he has!
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@doro_thea thank you so much!
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@doro_thea Your yeti is looking too cute! Love what you did with the overall design of the character sheet itself
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@doro_thea I definitely prefer the yeti without the necklace
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@Jacy13 that you! and I went without the neckless... I think that it was just me thinking it could be funny at one point...
